Textbook Romance - Comments

  • Rachele Kristine;

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    Oh my gawd. Hahaha. I can't believe I refound this story. This was my first story that I ever read by you, and this is where I fell in love with your writing. <3

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    June 23rd, 2013 at 07:26am
  • cruciatus.

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    You have no idea how excited I was to finally be able to read a great Max Green fanfic. I’m sure there’s others out there, but I’ve never been able to find them. This, however…this was absolutely fantastic and amazing and dear lord, I cried so many times during this story. I just love the way you portrayed Nev and Max, and Craig and Tey and just everyone. I simply loved it. Words can’t even…I can’t even…Yeah. I can’t even. XD

    I think part of the reason I loved this story so much is because it’s not conventional romance. It’s not all, “girl meets Max Green, they fall in love in a day, and then they’re screwing each other in every chapter.” No. Your story wasn’t that. It was perfection. It was beautiful and realistically done and I swear to God, this is the best Max Green story in existence. Honestly. It really is.

    I also love the fact that it’s so clear that you liked writing this story while you were doing it. It shows in the way you write the characters. It’ so detailed and I mean, really detailed. Everything from the hot cheetohs to the habit Max has of hiding his stuff (one would assume that he wouldn’t just hide his makeup from Craig, but other things as well…alas, you included that in this story, making it perfectly, beautifully realistic.)

    I also like the fact that this didn’t focus on Ronnie. Before you get me wrong, let me explain…because you already know I’m a huge Ronnie fan. I like the fact that this didn’t focus on Ronnie because during the time period of this story, had Ronnie been included it would have been so dramatic and it would have been unnecessary drama. You didn’t do that. It shows that you’re a serious writer who comes up with amazing plots…and trust me, amazing plots you most definitely come up with.

    This was just amazing. I can’t even. I still can’t even. I’m just gonna go and cuddle with my teddy bear now and keep re-reading this until the end of time. Thank you so much for writing it, you amazing person. You’re fantastic. :D

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    July 22nd, 2012 at 10:43am
  • gorgeousnightmarexo

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    i loved it. it was very well written.
    July 8th, 2012 at 12:49pm
  • Lucy Anathema.

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    I lost my place in the story and had to start all over; but I think you'll be happy to know that I finished reading the entire story in a little over twenty-four hours, interruptions included! Your story is the only one I have read that has been over fifteen or twenty chapters, and I think you did a wonderful job of keeping your readers entertained and allured by the magic of the touring band and falling in and out of love. This is a fantastic story; thank you for sharing it with us.

    I'm going to check out more of your writing now!
    June 29th, 2012 at 07:42am
  • ZombieCreatures

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    Your story was amazing the ending is completely realistic and the ending you wrote is brilliant. Never stop writing please.
    June 21st, 2012 at 05:39pm
  • ZombieCreatures

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    Your story was amazing the ending is completely realistic and the ending you wrote is brilliant. Never stop writing please.
    June 21st, 2012 at 05:39pm
  • littleedeath

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    :( awhh I can't believe it's over.. I loved this story, it's one of the best ones I've ever read! The ending was really good and hella cutee! Keep writing xx.
    June 21st, 2012 at 06:00am
  • synfulldreams

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    I fucking love this story and I love the ending ... I'm kind of sad for it to be the end though but non the less it was an amazing story!
    June 21st, 2012 at 04:16am
  • laceyvengeance

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    I'm so sad it's over! But it was a pretty great ending. c:
    June 21st, 2012 at 01:59am
  • xorachsauce

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    I really liked the ending- I think that was a good place for it to end. It was very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :D
    June 20th, 2012 at 11:14pm
  • let_it_be.

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    I love the ending. :D This is such an amazing story. This was deffinatly one of my favorite stories. Good job<3
    June 20th, 2012 at 03:52pm
  • FellSoHard

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    That was actually a really great ending. I really enjoyed it simply because of the fact it wasnt a textbook ending. Thanks for a great story! :)
    June 20th, 2012 at 12:59pm
  • hellsbelle

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    This was amazing! Sad it's ended :(
    June 20th, 2012 at 12:30pm
  • customuser

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    :) This is one of my favourite Max Green stories. I loved this, and I can't wait to see what else you'll come up with next. :D
    June 20th, 2012 at 10:33am
  • DisneylandAcidTrip;

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    Awe :) I love Max. And Ginny :) Update soon! ^__^
    June 13th, 2012 at 10:59pm
  • synfulldreams

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    Loved the update :) Can't wait for more. I love her and Max together!
    June 12th, 2012 at 12:19am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Loved the update
    June 11th, 2012 at 05:26pm
  • faster.

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    Sooooo... you should update this soon :) Pretty Please?
    June 11th, 2012 at 03:24am
  • DisneylandAcidTrip;

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    Love this story times 10000000:) Can't wait to read more, I love where this one is going. ^_^
    June 7th, 2012 at 08:07am
  • Forever.In.Ink

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    I adore this story its amazing, Please update soon? you can't end it here :)
    June 7th, 2012 at 12:00am