June 23rd, 2013 at 07:26am
You have no idea how excited I was to finally be able to read a great Max Green fanfic. I’m sure there’s others out there, but I’ve never been able to find them. This, however…this was absolutely fantastic and amazing and dear lord, I cried so many times during this story. I just love the way you portrayed Nev and Max, and Craig and Tey and just everyone. I simply loved it. Words can’t even…I can’t even…Yeah. I can’t even.
I think part of the reason I loved this story so much is because it’s not conventional romance. It’s not all, “girl meets Max Green, they fall in love in a day, and then they’re screwing each other in every chapter.” No. Your story wasn’t that. It was perfection. It was beautiful and realistically done and I swear to God, this is the best Max Green story in existence. Honestly. It really is.
I also love the fact that it’s so clear that you liked writing this story while you were doing it. It shows in the way you write the characters. It’ so detailed and I mean, really detailed. Everything from the hot cheetohs to the habit Max has of hiding his stuff (one would assume that he wouldn’t just hide his makeup from Craig, but other things as well…alas, you included that in this story, making it perfectly, beautifully realistic.)
I also like the fact that this didn’t focus on Ronnie. Before you get me wrong, let me explain…because you already know I’m a huge Ronnie fan. I like the fact that this didn’t focus on Ronnie because during the time period of this story, had Ronnie been included it would have been so dramatic and it would have been unnecessary drama. You didn’t do that. It shows that you’re a serious writer who comes up with amazing plots…and trust me, amazing plots you most definitely come up with.
This was just amazing. I can’t even. I still can’t even. I’m just gonna go and cuddle with my teddy bear now and keep re-reading this until the end of time. Thank you so much for writing it, you amazing person. You’re fantastic. :D
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