I simply adore the way you write. It's simple yet informative and leaves you wanting more eveything single chapter! By the way, sorry I didn't comment earlier I haven't had access to the internet and only just seen your comment and story comment on four letter lie.
So I was reading your story and I went to check who the author was and I was like why is that name so familiar...and then I realized that you write Paint Me an Image and Trouble Maker and I was all like WOAH!!!!! Yeah anyway keep writing I love it!!!!
Another great chapter, I really enjoyed the way you portrayed Escape The Fate. It kind of reminded me of a family in the aspect that the "kids" fight over silly things but it's all in fun and games. Great work, looking forward to reading more :)
This is great. You have a very detailed writing skill which I personally adore. Great story line and I love the way you describe Max as being basically an ignorant sex drived asshole. Keep up the great work, can't wait for more!
Loooooved it :)
Also, I really like your piercings!