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  • liarliarpantsonfire

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    I love it! I can definitely relate to her (only im better with skiing than snowboarding haha and i have yet to be noticed for my photography haha) Please update soon(:
    Lots of Love<3
    August 19th, 2011 at 10:39pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    I love this chapter :3
    August 19th, 2011 at 09:27pm
  • Gurl

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    Cool story
    August 19th, 2011 at 06:44pm
  • Max Ryde

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    :D Is the frends crew is there, where's Haze? O.o
    I agree with the last sentence, I mean seriously. Jumping a train is insane!
    August 19th, 2011 at 11:13am
  • TearsOfTheHeart7

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    I'm liking this story... I really can't wait to find out all the secrets :)
    post more soon
    August 19th, 2011 at 11:00am
  • TigerLillie13

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    I really love that I didn't have to read the prequel to get it, y'know? Anyway, I totally love the flashbacks, and that you keep track of the dates, otherwise I would be totally confused, bro.

    Btw, I happen to visit Tahoe aout once a month on my way to see my sister, so I'm totally glad I can tell what you're talking about ith the snowboarding and stuff.

    Btw2, I happened to be on a photagraphy kick last year so I know aout that stuff too. Cool.
    August 19th, 2011 at 10:31am
  • NothinNNomore

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    So, I really like this :) I'm glad that you commented on my profile :p
    August 19th, 2011 at 09:03am
  • Unusually._.Usual

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    Now I wanna know what happened between Stella and Ethan and who 'she' is... Thanks for getting me here reading this, I anxiously await the next intense chapter! <3 You give you characters specific qualities and personalities, it helps to get right into the story and connect to them on a personal note! :D
    August 19th, 2011 at 07:46am
  • Unusually._.Usual

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    So I gave up on the comment/chapter thing... This is great! I'm gonna go subscribe right after this!
    August 19th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • CrazyCall

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    This might have been a filler but I totally liked it. I am one of those people that like to get how everyone became friends and how everything works out and why. And then everyones history even the small people and you are doing just that. So I really like this chapter. Plus you got to see a side of her that you might not have and that's her crazy let's do anything side. I wish I let that side show more often but I don't. Really like the chapter sorry I related this to my life once again. Anyway good.
    August 19th, 2011 at 07:28am
  • Unusually._.Usual

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    Chapter2: All I can really say is oh shiiit, and saw that coming... Good chapter, I think I'm beginning to see your plot!
    August 19th, 2011 at 07:00am
  • Unusually._.Usual

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    Hi! So I figure that I'll give a run-down on my thoughts of each chapter in a separate cooment, just so I think of everything and nothing escapes my memory :) Chapter 1: Interesting, alluring, makes me question exactly what happened in her past, who this Ethan is, and it's a great introduction to what I would think are main characters,the girl the brother and the friend. Currently I would like to read more!
    August 19th, 2011 at 06:51am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    I like it and want more!
    August 19th, 2011 at 05:58am
  • CrazyCall

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    So my best friend is a guy as well and people always joke with us that were gonna get together or don't do any thing stupid together. And the friendship that they have totally reminds me of what I have. I enjoyed this chapter it made me smile.
    August 18th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • Max Ryde

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    :D She jumped over a train? O.O...
    August 17th, 2011 at 09:48am
  • softballstarr13

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    It's getting so good! I can't wait for the next update! (:
    August 16th, 2011 at 12:31pm
  • Max Ryde

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    Sorry I didn't comment early. I've been a bit occupido to read.
    'Tis good, keep it up
    August 15th, 2011 at 06:01am
  • CrazyCall

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    Why do I feel like they broke because she picked something over love. And know he is going to marry a girl who loves something more then Ethan. This chapter was good. I going off to school soon and I know I am going to go crazy with out my baby who is a dog too. She is so cute. Well I really liked this chapter. And I have a feeling that their new jobs are going to be together again. Ah can't wait!!!!
    August 12th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    well I'm sorry you are lacking in comments :/ but I do love it and I'm sure you'll get more once people see how AMAZING this story is :D just have faith and wait it out (not faith as in religion)
    August 12th, 2011 at 03:36am
  • KaeBug

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    THIS IS REALLY GOOD!!! xD
    August 12th, 2011 at 12:43am