she needs to get with him soon or I may flips a shit... warning :P this chapter is so sweet! he is so thoughtful with the ring that she still has and WEARS DAILY I may add!
I like that you do your research for things and make it seem as real as possible. I also like the memory that you put in this chapter. I was thinking that he was gonna ask her to marry him and that's why they broke up but no. All good can't wait to see why they ate fighting. And you can still see that he likes her. Love it!!!!
This chapter was cute. I like how you do the flash backs. I also think it would be cute to see the behind the scene kind of things and fun little facts. Very good story. Great chapter.
So I totally like the flash back. And I am dying to find out what actually happened between them. He seems to be okay and wants to work things out and she doesn't. Can't wait for the next update. Also I am wondering what this new guy is going to play out in this whole thing he seems really cute and nice. Can't wait.
I thought the first story was great, but the re-write is even better! I want to know what happened! Who is this "her"!? I'll just have to wait and find out. Thanks for the update :)
it's officail you can't write a crappy story if you tried, I'm jealous! and Kyle as a close friend :D again :D lol I am DYING to know what went on with Ethan :P