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  • briannal14

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    I'm really excited to find out what happened to them!!
    August 12th, 2011 at 12:10am
  • cuteself22

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    very very very good so far. jux wish stells would open up a lil more :) !! but im lovin it. keep up the good writing
    August 11th, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • spidermyth

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    I like it. (: please update soon?
    August 11th, 2011 at 08:43pm
  • KaeBug

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    GREAT chapter(:
    I like how they made up(:
    August 11th, 2011 at 05:47pm
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    she needs to get with him soon or I may flips a shit... warning :P this chapter is so sweet! he is so thoughtful with the ring that she still has and WEARS DAILY I may add!
    August 11th, 2011 at 02:23am
  • CrazyCall

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    I like that you do your research for things and make it seem as real as possible. I also like the memory that you put in this chapter. I was thinking that he was gonna ask her to marry him and that's why they broke up but no. All good can't wait to see why they ate fighting. And you can still see that he likes her. Love it!!!!
    August 10th, 2011 at 09:14pm
  • cuscha

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    Yes! Give us some facts!! I'd love it :)
    August 10th, 2011 at 01:20pm
  • KaeBug

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    more pls!
    this is great!!!
    August 9th, 2011 at 06:13pm
  • Max Ryde

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    Hi. Sorry I haven't checked my mail in ages!
    It's awesome Vee. Behind the scenes would be cool
    August 9th, 2011 at 12:51pm
  • CrazyCall

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    This chapter was cute. I like how you do the flash backs. I also think it would be cute to see the behind the scene kind of things and fun little facts. Very good story. Great chapter.
    August 8th, 2011 at 10:34pm
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    Aw! That's so sweet! :D
    August 8th, 2011 at 08:24pm
  • KaeBug

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    LOVE IT!
    Can't wait for you to update(:
    August 8th, 2011 at 06:35am
  • CrazyCall

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    So I totally like the flash back. And I am dying to find out what actually happened between them. He seems to be okay and wants to work things out and she doesn't. Can't wait for the next update. Also I am wondering what this new guy is going to play out in this whole thing he seems really cute and nice. Can't wait.
    August 8th, 2011 at 12:37am
  • Dreamwriter

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    I thought the first story was great, but the re-write is even better! I want to know what happened! Who is this "her"!? I'll just have to wait and find out. Thanks for the update :)
    August 7th, 2011 at 11:07pm
  • softballstarr13

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    This chapter was realllly good. I love this story!!! <3
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:49pm
  • glee_girl

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    i love this story so much! plz update ASAP!
    August 7th, 2011 at 09:16pm
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    it's officail you can't write a crappy story if you tried, I'm jealous! and Kyle as a close friend :D again :D lol I am DYING to know what went on with Ethan :P
    August 7th, 2011 at 09:02pm
  • briannal14

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    I have a feeling she caught him cheating. Update!
    August 7th, 2011 at 08:16pm
  • ChanelAlyshia

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    i agree 100% with briannal14 =D
    August 7th, 2011 at 08:57am
  • kooleen

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    Love it :D update soon :)
    August 7th, 2011 at 08:14am