Running With Lions - Comments

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I'm really enjoying this story so far! I haven't read many stories set in Europe, so the dialogue and the descriptions are so interesting to me. I absolutely love Lavin. She's like this rebel princess. Like she's not stuck up or pompous or so beyond full of herself. She's someone people can relate to. Keep writing! You're very good at it! I can't wait to finish reading this and the sequel!

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Aw, I've never read a story like this! Very original imo.
I like your writing style, it's simple yet descriptive enough where I can visualize everything going on and actually get into the story.

Keep up the good work!

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This story was actually more interesting than i had pictured it to be. I thought it was going to be bored by it, seeing as I was never into these kind of stories, but you changed my view!

I like your writing style. I like the balance between dialogue and description. I'm half way through and am still on the edge of my seat! Great work.

I can tell you're a really great writer! I love the balance that you have between your description and dialogue. It seems like every line of dialogue that you have is evened out by the description with it. I think Lavin and Genieve's banter was really funny and you could tell they had a good frienship. I especially like when she made that shot about making out in public because it is so true! The first chapter makes me wonder how things are going to work out with Harry since he's liplocking with other girls! I think this is really great so far and I wish you the best of luck with it!

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This story is very well-written, and the subject is quite interesting! I really didn't know people wrote about like, the queen and stuff! Anyway, I think I wrote a really nice story. Cool title, too!(:

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I wasn't entirely sure what to expect from the story when i read the description. But I read a few chapters into it. Unfortunately I gotta say it's not really for me.
However, I think it's a good story. Even if I don't personally find a lot of interest in it. I wnana mentioned I really enjoy the way it's written. Usually I find stories with short paragraphs like this one has really boring, because I feel like the reader can't really get into it. But this is different. It is very well written even without a great amount of detail and it just flows. So I think that's great! I like the layout, too.

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Your title already had me ready and excited to read this story. Everything you write seems to be so realistic, from the descriptions to the dialogue, it's all believable. I didn't see any errors so far and I'm truly enjoying reading this. All I can say for you is keep up the good work and I'm totally subscribing so I can find this story later and read the sequel.

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Okie, dokie. This was a nice story. When you mentioned the first characters name I couldn't help but think of Downton Abbey (idk if you watch but whatever) and I also like your layout. It goes well with your story and it doesn't completely over power the screen. I didn't spot hardly any grammar errors and your description is really easy to follow. Over all, good job. Keep it up and happy writing! :3

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This story is really interesting. The title and summary drew me in. Lavinia seems like a really interesting character. I can only imagine what it's like to be the princess of Denmark...so much pressure on you.
Ugh, I don't like Carolina. She seems like a word that rhymes with witch.

I love your details. They're so vivid and the imagery you create is perfect. You've done a wonderful job!

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Right from the get-go I was interested, why? Your title, it is clever, and it sounds pretty intense, haha! Lavin sounds like such a nice gal, really, and Caroline, ugh, you've done well in making me dislike her!

Your details are great, the layout as well, and I honestly don't know why this doesn't have anymore recommendations. Great job, love! ;)

I am finally moving my lazy fingers and commenting on chapters of your story after many guilt ridden days of silent reading and your friendly replies to my comments of the sequel- I just had to review and reread 'Running with Lions' since I felt that I was utterly being a very lazy inconsiderable twit and that you deserved some more reviews

( 9 your going to see a LOT of emoticons coming from me- I just discovered them!)

One of the wonderful observations that occured when I read the prologue was the precise, sweet, short and informative little introduction to the story, how we are presented with Lavin before accompanying her and the journey she has. I truly admire you and people who have that skill for that because I simply can not summarise or give a witty line of some sort, beckoning readers in ( this is present with my reviews , the chagrin i have when I write them, which is why it is not very often)

A great matter of rereading is experiencing the witty remarks, quotes and thoughts that characters may have in particlar with this chapter (1) with Lavin's harsh whisper of 'pointing isn't polite' and Gen's snorted remark and the description of Ben under the influence of alcohol

"His eyes were glazed over and a lopsided grin was displayed on his face with a fag hanging haphazardly from them"

This stuff, the descriptions- the subtle yet image creating depictions of the interactions and thoughts in here really make me envy authors who posses this skill such as you and oh they make me laugh and adore Ben even more

I apologize for the who-knows-how-long comment, I just wanted to make you -the author, feel more appreciated and give more comments that featured substantially more than a few ill abbreviated words ( such as other stories I have seen).



I will stop typing now.... I am going to make it my aim to review at least 3/4 of your Lavin/Harry stories so yes.... I will be making a regular appearance -textwise

Are u posting another chapter to this one, or are u going straight to a sequel, either way I love this story!!

I actually really liked the ending of this story. It shows that even though a lot of changes or coming (or have came) Lavin is prepared, but uncertain for what the future is going to bring. And it definitely sets up for a sequel -nudge, nudge, hint, hint- :D But whether you decide to continue or not to you still get this feeling that Harry is most definitely not going to let Lavin leave him this time and vice versa.

Anyways I loved this story throughout the whole, entire thing and I'm glad I happened to stumble upon. Literally one of the best Prince Harry stories written on here.

This is the 'end'? What.
Well, it was a nice one, nonetheless. I hope you continue this story. I like Prince Harry.
:)

amazing! Period.

I can't wait for the sequel. Loved this.

It's alright to be a little selfish from time to time.
Please have a sequel :)
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You leave it there!!! Ugh. Loved it. I hope with Lavin becoming Crown Princess doesn't hurt her and Harry's relationship. Can't wait for more.

Amazing new chapter! I loved how you depicted everything about the scenes and how she was feeling, especially with Harry. It was short with Harry, but you got the message- she's worried. And that tiara does sound like a huge pain to wear- I give her props for that. I didn't see any mistakes, major ones anyways. Keep up the great work(: