I enjoyed reading this chapter, But to be honest he shouldn't have walked out on her, she didn't do anything wrong, I mean even if she was really her friend at first she would've told her to prepare her for becoming the third in line for the throne's wife! But the most romantic part would be making up! </3 :') Seriously can't wait for the next chapter.
OK, just a quick observation before I continue on this wonderful new update.... At the end, it should be "Lavin cried even harder now" instead of hard now.
But oh my goodness! I can't believe Caroline punched Lavin the face. OK, well I lie, I can see that, but in front of a large number of people!! I don't think she should have done that because now that just ruins her reputation even more.
This is going to sound mean, but Lavin did deserve not only being punched, but Harry walking out on her. I mean I'm glad she got the truth out and all, but certain actions have certain consequences. However, I do hope everything works out. And despite everything- I kinda hope Lavin and Caroline become friends. I think it would be good for both of them. Even though at first Lavin just wanted to become friends with her for selfish reasons, I think that after awhile they became pretty good friends. They kinda balance each other out a bit. I don't know how to explain that reasoning, but I just get that feeling.
Anyways, I'm so glad you updated again in such a short amount of time. Lovely job- keep it up darling!!
So this was such a cute little, fluffy chapter. And I must say- I adored it.I'm glad they've finally admitted their feelings for each other. But as always, I feel bad about Caroline. But this was super cute and I'm glad that even Harry has admitted to have kept his feelings for Lavin.
I didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes- so no comments there. Just keep up the great work and I can't see how the next chapter turns out.
UGHHHHHHH I DON'T GET NOTIFICATIONS FOR THIS STORY, AND HAVEN'T SINCE LIKE, CHAPTER 8. wtf, Mibba. Get your shit together. Anywho, I'm all caught up and seriously in love. I love Lavin and Harry together. Chapter 14 kept me grinning like a fool. CAN'T WAIT FOR WHAT IS NEXT. (Caroline jumping off Big Ben, eh?)
Oh my goodness. Poor Caroline- of course she has to find out that Lavin and Harry hung out and of course the magazines go and make it worse. I hate the media and this new chapter only makes me hate it more. But I'm getting off track. Amazing update- I'm glad you showed Caroline's emotions in this. Her feeling stupid and betrayed and thinking that she could become friends with Lavin even though she had hated her earlier. I also like how you can tell that she's a bit jealous of her too.
I hope everything turns out all right for everyone.
I can't believe I missed your last update! Ah! But anywho- I've loved both updates. The last one though, I think you kind of rushed through it because I did see more mistakes than normal for you. I just wanted to point that out. There's nothing major about the mistakes though- so you're good.
But they kissed! Oh my goodness- what are they going to do now? I feel bad for Caroline in a way though. I mean, if my boyfriend kissed an ex of his while we were dating but I happened to be away I would be furious! And then at the girl! Because, whether Lavin likes it or not- her and Caroline are friends and that's going to sting much more than if they weren't.
Lol she's drunk. Of course she'll sleep with anybody if asked. But I kinda like where the chapter ended. Take your time updating though. No rush. cc: <3