I loved the new chapter! I wonder about Caroline though....hmmmm interesting how he didn't bring her up. Anyways! Can't wait to see what happens next(:
I loved it :D Great as always. I know this is a shameless plug but I see a lot of people read this (as you should it's a fanatic story.) so I feel the need to do a shameless plug of my newly started Prince Harry story. It says I have over 22 readers but I only know of one that comments and really likes it. So if you would please check it out and if you like comment and subscribe, I update twice a week. Thank you. http://stories.mibba.com/read/420495/You-Give-Me-That-Feeling/
To the story and my review! I'm so sad to see how Lavin is hurting, but I give her a lot of credit to be able to recognize her selfishness and to start doing what is right- even though it does hurt her. Of course the Queen would be able to recognize it wasn't just simple curiosity.
However, I am sincerely hoping that Harry doesn't ask Caroline to marry him. That would be absolutely horrid! But I hope Harry isn't that dumb to be ignoring all the signs of his feelings for Lavin. Although! I must say, I do hope that Lavin will remain friends with Caroline (I know that seems a bit weird) but I think Caroline would rather continue her career. I don't know. It seems like an odd friendship, but I think it could still work out.
This chapter was superly (it isn't a word- but oh well) amazing. I think this chapter was one of the best because Harry finally realized his feelings for Lavin are still there and blah, blah, blah. But oh my gods- such an awesome chapter. I was thinking it was just a dream at first, but then as it continued I thought it wasn't- but I felt as if you knew you would trick the reader somewhat into believing it was real- but I knew it wasn't! Hahaha, anyways- love, love, LOVE this story and you must continue on with it.
MUAHAHAHAHA! That's what I think... Lol really about the fact that Lavin's plan is kinda working for now. And Harry sort of realizing his feelings for her were still there. cc: <3
i loved the part where he took off his shirt and all (next time in front of lavin for real?) in some parts like this "relishing in the feeling of every individual droplet bouncing off his face one after the other. As the water washed over his arms and the rest of his body he felt all his muscles loosening." Yeah.. It was too much.. details..?I mean it's like you're trying too hard. But what do I know. I would've liked it better if he had just took off his clothes, took a shower lavin hopped in and they started kissing then he woke up and something happened. Good job though.