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  • foREVer a Fiction

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    I just found this and I fucking love it.
    It kept me from doing my homework assignments, but oh well. It's worth it xD
    Update soon pleasssee!!! :D
    February 13th, 2012 at 07:46am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Matt and Jimmy are right. She needs to tell Brian. And she definitely needs to talk to Zacky. And I'm going to be pissed if Brian leaves Hailey. It wasn't her fault and she stopped it too. Great update! :D
    February 13th, 2012 at 01:16am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Alright I kind of seen that coming lol. It's understandable though, I never thought Zacky would get over her and I guess I was right. I'm not going to hate on him though, it's just how he feels. If Hailey knows for sure that she doesn't want to be with him, then she needs to sit him down and have a long talk with him. Also I think Hailey is either seeing Jimmy or Johnny. I hope she does tell Brian about the kiss soon because if she waits too long he's going to be even more mad. This chapter was amazing! Can't wait for the next update! <33
    February 10th, 2012 at 02:46am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Zacky! >< Why can't he just accept she loves Brian? Instead he's got to trick her (that's how I see it) into kissing him and telling her he can be better than Brian. Grr stupid Zacky. And Gena pissed me off too. I hate girls like that. So damn annoying. But who is she going to talk to? O: Loved the update though! :D
    February 10th, 2012 at 12:22am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    This chapter. Oh my god, I was laughing so hard. Pinkly as a cock block really made my day! Uh-oh, I've got this gut feeling something is going to happen with Zacky and Hailey. You said we won't like it, so now I'm like scared, lol. I hope you don't turn him into like a crazy rapist or something, because I really like Zacky as a good guy. Haha, anyways this chapter made my day soo much better! Congrats on the stars and readers! I personally think this story deserves sooo much more than that, but congrats anyways! Can't wait till Thursday now! <3
    February 6th, 2012 at 01:15am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Haha, I loved Pinkly in this! XD And Brian's so desperate to get some. I loved it. But now I'm dreading the next chapter. D: I'm gonna get pissed at Zack. Loved the update though! :D
    February 5th, 2012 at 11:41pm
  • Madam Shadows;

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    This chapter was sooo cute! (: Brian and Hailey are too cute for each other! <3 I personally think you should be able to write and set up your story the way you want it set up. That's bullshit for someone reporting you on the paragraphs, so you write it differently who cares? At least they're readable. I agree with you on the whole thing that reporting should only be for if someone steals ideas. Anyways, I think this story was great the way your written it, sorry you had to fix it another way. Can't wait to read more! <3
    January 30th, 2012 at 12:34am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Aw, cute. ^.^ I love those two. But Zack's got to get his shit together. >< Fucking rude to butt in when he knew what was going on. Whatever, didn't stop them from going at it again. ;) Fricking awesome update! :D
    January 29th, 2012 at 11:03pm
  • Annargh

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    Im in love with this story! :)
    January 29th, 2012 at 10:43pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    Aw, I loved it! ^.^ Super sweet and just adorable. And your sex scene was bad. It's pretty good considering you're still new to it. It'll get easier and better as it goes. (Knows from personal experience) But I freaking loved it so much! I'm really going to be mad if Zacky starts to screw it up for them just so you know.
    January 23rd, 2012 at 01:02am
  • Rachele Kristine;

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    Oh.my.god. <333 YES!(:
    This was just amazing. You did fine on the sex scene!
    Can't wait to find out more!
    January 22nd, 2012 at 11:30pm
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Awh, yay! <3 This chapter was amazing! I'm so happy they finally did the deed. This was just so cute & adorable. I just hope everything stays good between them. The sex scene was good, you did a good job at writing it. Can't wait for more. ;D
    January 22nd, 2012 at 11:09pm
  • smallxface

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    I like this chapter! :3 And the sex scene was okay, waaayyyyy better than the one I wrote in my story! >.< Mine sucked ass. And I don't mean that literally. LOOLOLOLOLOOOOOL xD Well anyway, as I said before, I like this chapter! :3
    January 22nd, 2012 at 10:14pm
  • Rachele Kristine;

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    Cliffhanger = Me stressing out and waiting for the next chapterr.
    I love this chapter<3 It didn't suck at all, nothing about this story sucked.
    I'll be waiting for the next update(:
    January 20th, 2012 at 03:16am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Dude, this chapter came out awesome. I'm glad what I predicted didn't happen. (: I honestly don't know what the surprise could be. Like, maybe he made the house all decorated in like candles and roses or something, so they could have sex for the first time. Ugh! This cliff hanger is killing me.. I really hope you can find a way to update soon. <3 By the way, you shouldn't say that this might of came out crappy, because if you're writing it, there is no way anything could come out crappy. You're a very talented writer and nothing you write would make me think it is crappy. Anyways, loved it! <3
    January 19th, 2012 at 11:52pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    You suck! D: Do you know that I hate hate hate cliffhangers? They're evil! I want to know what that bastard did lol. And this came out great, don't worry. :) Loved it so much!
    January 19th, 2012 at 11:06pm
  • Angelina Shadows

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    I really really like this story. It is really awesome and I look forward to updates. You are a great writer and I hope that you continue to write. Also I love the banner. Brian and Zacky look so hot!
    January 19th, 2012 at 08:46pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I can't wait to see where Syn is. In a way it could be "awesome" (get me right) if she caught him doing something bad (like cheating), because It'll mean drama. But in the other way it wouldn't be good, because they really love each other.

    Update soon please? :D
    January 16th, 2012 at 03:56pm
  • Madam Shadows;

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    I got this gut feeling that Brian has done something stupid and Zacky is going to have to pick the pieces up of Hailey. You really need to update soon, I must know what has gotten into him. This chapter was amazing like always. Keep up the great work! <3
    January 16th, 2012 at 12:20am
  • Synful Shadows

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    That is the reason you never get ready for prom with other girls lol. You do it on your own because you're already stressed out enough. I learned from my own experiences lol. But where the hell is Brian? Nothing bad. I'll be mad if you make it something bad on their prom night. But I'm thinking he's trying to do some sort of surprise for her. Great update! :D Can't wait for the next one.
    January 16th, 2012 at 12:12am