This was a beautiful story! The epilogue had me tearing up and it was just... perfect. A wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it. :)
I just thought I'd let you know this was incredible beyond words. I don't comment often but you should know I've waited your chapters anxiously and reading them leaves me speechless every time. These last two were the culmination. I'm crying, so it's your fault I'm going to show up for work with bloodshot eyes. You're simply amazing.
And thank you for closing with Fiction. Now I'm crying even harder.
I don't know anything about hockey or most of the players, but I have loved this story. I've laughed and I've cried... This is seriously one of the best stories I have ever read on here, and I lost count of how many I've read a long time ago. This was a different kind of plot and you're an amazing writer.
This entire story is just beautiful. I can't even say anything else. Haha. This chapter was perfect, though. It's like... I hate waiting but it's so good when it's posted that it's justified. Haha. Not that there's really a long time between posts, it just seems like forever because I'm looking for it. I'm really sad that this is ending. I'll probably spend some of my summer break re-reading it. I can't wait for your next story to start, though. :D
I apologize that I'm bad with commenting regularly, but I ADORE this story. I love the originality, the writing (great writing...and a grasp of grammar and the English language) are hard to find here sometimes. I'm sad to see it end!