The Light That Wraps You - Comments

Wow! I really love this story already!
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Wahhhh I loved Chapter 3! Genius idea! It's finally coming together! She has Luc's heart! Oh my godd this is so exciting! This story is beautiful and so is the way that you write it. This is probably the most original hockey story ever. I was wondering if The Gargoyle is a real book? I love Lux's character she's just so different. It's very interesting.
Great job!

I honestly can't figure out why there aren't more comments on this already. Great job on chap2 as always boss.
"No pain, like they said. No pain for you, but plenty leftover for the rest of us." GGREAAT LINE. this whole chapter was filled with great lines
i can totally see this whole light thing you're trying to get at Lux, light, sunshine. you da bombbb.
plus that whole instant idea was genius, save some brilliance for the rest of us will ya?

IM SO READY FOR MORE OF THISS
Dr. Lowe totally reminds me of Dr. Cox from scrubs which is a show I used to be obsessed with until the 8th season and then it just got sketchy and not like real scrubs at all.
I wanna know who the person is that she's talking to, like whose heart she has.
GUurrreat job as always. Triple thumbs up yo. Nice Pablo Neruda quote, dankkk