On the Turning Away - Comments

Great story. Update soon, please!

this needs to be updated ASAP
I need to know how shits gonna go down in the next chapter

Still awesome.. I can't think if anything else to say right now beside: more soon please!

yesssssssssss
she's getting her surveillance equipment!
time to bug that fucking house and learn some shit!

Damn... I'm wondering how this squib will have of effects on the storyline.. And this whole Bill thing.. I'm just so curious... Good chapter and I hope for more soon ^^

Two flawless updates in one night, gosh you spoil us.
I still can't wait to find more out about this squib, I'm sure it's going to be a mighty juicy bit of storyline.

Oh! I've only seen torture like that in films, reading it really was something else. I cannot wait to find out what this Squib has to do with anything.

Holy Crap! Gwen is amazing! And the atmosphere and setting was so well developed. Flawless ! All of it!

you just had to add water boarding to this, didn't you?

Holy crap. Gwen is such a BAMF!!!!

But who is this Ignatius Blishwick? I MUST KNOW!
What did they want from him?
This is so mysterious. So many questions... I'm not sure I'll be able to remain sane while I wait for the next update...

this is fantastic! more soon please!

Seems like that took quite a toll on her. I'm wondering how it will go from here on. This is a REALLY good chapter and I can't wait to read more and also see how Bill's full reaction will be. ^^

that was some hardcore shit right there
my mind was racing and I just had to keep reading and reading and AH
that ending, you bitch! how could you end it there?!
the battle was just getting radder!

Stubborn gingers! Great action chapter!!!!!!

Ah, those damn characters that refuse to cooperate! They really think they can do whatever they want! This update was amazing though. I sort of wish that it had actually been part of the movies, so that I could see that battle on screen. I could picture it going on in my head, but imagine what it would have been on screen. That would've been... aahh, bloody brilliant!

this was certainly worth the wait, it is a bloody awesome update/chapter. It is in my top five (if not top three) for battlescenes so far... seriously, it's really good compared to some I have read before... hmmm.. other than that, I'm glad you're thinking about updating a bit sooner next time. erhmmm... another good chapter and I can't wait to read even more ^.^

you need to fucking update this.

cuz I needs to know what the hells going on with them.

I think explaining the past is a great idea! And I love how she said she'd just make it look like an accident if she hurt him lol

This is not gonna work, you know. It's not going to work if with each new chapter you make me want to beg for an update. Because I really, really want an update. And I love the idea of following Bill and explaning the past and damn now I'm really really really impatient.

Well, that's it for getting a little overdramatic. Now I completely forgot what I really wanted to say. But the chapter was brilliant, as always. I laughed when she told him to talk to himself then. I just loved how wonderfully awkward and tensed the conversation got. I can't wait to read more of this.