On the Turning Away - Comments

And so the more intense bit should begin!
She has finally joined the order and I'm glad she was able to talk her father down somewhat.
Reading this chapter made me quite hungry as well.

You know what I said in the comment I wrote a few minutes ago? I changed my mind. I want to read more of this. It is brilliant. I love it. I'm addicted already!
I know I can't ask for an update, for I'll be crossing my fingers and hoping, hoping, hoping, for a new chapter soon :)

I had tears rolling down my eyes pretty well through the entire chapter.
The whole hating on Bill thing is still a mystery to "us" readers which is totally different and I am actually enjoying the curiosity it brings.
The end was sooooo sad yet so romantic and adorable!
Gahh!
I can't wait to read your next update!
Hope you have an amazing time writing it :D

Aww not her mommy :( I love this story already and cant wait for more.

P.S: the banner seems to have disappeared...

Oh dear, this has been started, and I haven’t found the time to read it earlier. It would certainly have made the hectic days more bearable if I had had time to enjoy this interesting tale, and honestly I was a little angry at myself when I discovered that you had two chapters posted and that I hadn’t read them yet. But now I’ve read it, and I’m happy, but also intrigued by what has happened and will happen. I feel that this is yet another one of your stories that I might get addicted to, and hopefully you will update soon to prove me right and increase my addiction to whatever you write.

Looks like a great story

this is very well written. i especially like the tone of the first chapter, which i have to say reminds me a lot of Atlas Shrugged (one of my favorite books, by the way, so its quite a substantial compliment for me to give). her ideals and strength remind me a lot of Dagny. but regardless, i look forward to reading more.

Oh already some tension between the two.
I wonder what drew them apart and what made her despise him so.
Already an upsetting start to the story line and I'm sure it will continue to be just as emotional.

Write on dear friend, and I cannot wait to read the next update.
Have a glorious day :D

Love love loooove it! :)

My jaw dropped, I'm glad that I decided to stumble along your profile and double check that I'm up to date with your updates or I would have missed this one.
I can't wait to see the path this story takes and I'm sure that however the story goes you will write it fantastically. : )

Have a wonderful day and I hope to read more from you soon! :D

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