Forever's Not Supposed to End - Comments

awsome chapter i really wanted to hug matthew in this more when you can get well soon :D xx

i loved the update :) i hope you geel better! :)

awwww i hope it's nothing too serious and i hope you get better and i think i like this chapter better than if you had written the sex it's has more depth <3

amazing chapter, as always expected :) i have a feeling that there's going to be sex in this next chapter XD i wonder what Nathan's going to do with the guitar and paper, maybe write a song? excited for the next update :3

I felt bad for Nathan but yay for Matthew/Hayley cuteness. Cutey pie. And that reminds me, I kinda really miss Josh and Zac in the band, just sayin'. Well, it was cool how Hayley didn't start out too confident and was feeling more comfy by moral support. The Leone twins are so sweet and I love how the two still adore each other, and I hope they still love each other despite the fact that they are both kinda fighting over Hayley. Cuz brotherly twin friendship > relationship with girl.

Update soon, ehh? I'll be out of town all next week so if you don't see my comment, don't be offended. I'll come back and catch up to all the chapters I missed and i'll leave you a long comment to makeup for all the time gone

awwww i feel bad for Nathan :(

Aww poor Nathan :( I like it :D Just reading the whole incident stuff broke my heart, taking back to when I first heard the news :(
I'm just so glad Matthew is doing better now and puts on one hell of show.
Good job at capturing emotions with the characters too :)

gahh!! dont make me choose!! i love them both!!

i loved this!!! it made my day a whole lot better ^_^
"You could by spanking me" oh god that was so cheesy but hilarious!!! XD
I loved reading Nathan's feelings, but he was kind of mean to Matthew :( but i do understand where he was coming from. In my opinion he did walk into it when he kissed her :P
update soon :D

okay. this is soo soooooo soooo kickass. I love how Nathan's like "you could by spanking me" OMG.... and it broke my heart when Hayley was like night Matthew, but Nathan should have expected it, considering the fact that Matthew and Hayley are very much into each other. But still poor guy, poor guy. And I was :( when Nathan implied for Matthew to back off and AWWed when Nathan took it back wanting Matt to be happy. I just love stories that have two siblings competing for a girl, it's just so many different emotions there, like you love your competition to death and possibly more than the actual girl but you both want the girl yourselves, I am feeling that bit of a tension rising up in this story and I'm as stoked as ever for your next chapter.

Hayley and Matthew ftw! <3
loved this chapter :DDD it was really cute :3 poor Hayley though
i have a feeling the girl Matthew saved though was her, idk why? ;)
catn wait for more :)

Hmph... no Nathan/Hayley action... haha... well idk whose team i'm on. Hayley and Matthew are adorable together and i have no idea how Nathan/Hayley together feels like. but this was cute, and I can imagine how pissed off Nathan is when the two lazy asses slept in ;p... i'd be knocking tables and slamming doors, kicking inanimate objects. Oh, and Hayley's ex is such a dick, I hope Matthew kicks his ass (when he recovers, of course) :) but poor hayley having to live with the horrible memories.

Haley and matthew i loved that update more asap

AHHHH, loving Nathan's side of the story now. I totally love it. I can't wait for some ass kicking drama to occur!!! I seriously can't. Anyways, Nathan's jealousy for Matthew and Hayley is kinda hot :) Andhis little flashback back in the hospital is sooooo cuteyyyy, but i wonder if Matthew suspects Nathan's "undying" love for Hayley yet

awwwww so sweet :3

OH DRAMA NEXT :D oh cant wait update asap :D and good chapter :D as always

omg this chatper was cute :) always good, as expected! update soon :D

id love to see Nathan returning from Europe and shit happening with jealousy and undefined feelngs, etc.

BTW, cute chapter. Love the little bath scene and Matthew's flirty comments. Also, wonderful interpretation of Playing God. Find it extremely romantic for Matthew to be writing it out for Hayley to help her get started on her music career. It's meaningful because it's actually words Hayley said and felt.

i dont even know but i thought the tub scene was totally cute

omg that was really cute :) i would actually like to see a bit of more moments like these with them, or like with Hayley and Nathan, cuz it kinda seems like Nathan's falling for her out of nowhere, if you get what i mean lol. i'd also like to see them get Hayley into their band(if that's what you're doing lol)
really good(as always!) cant wait for more :)