Forever's Not Supposed to End - Comments

YES!!! It's about time someone wrote a story, relative to Matthew's incident! This story is so fucking boss, and adding Hayley Williams to the mix? = you rock so much I'd cry. Anyways, I love this story and the relationship you've developed for Nathan and Matthew. It seems so realistic, like it's FOUR dimentional like i can feel it. Please, please, update soon! I can't believe I JUST found this (searching "Madina Lake" on the story page)

I just finished reading all the chapters and I loved it (:
I would write out a longer comment (I usually write them as I read) but I'm on my phone!
Anyways, you're a very good writer (:

YEAH DEDICATED :D *huggles* loved that and was so not seeing it being nathan and i did not guess that is the first time you have wrote straight sex. wow more soon please asap :D xx

whoa that was awesum!!! and thank you!! *hug* <3

omg noooo i was hopping it would be Matthew xDDD actually, it's not all that hard to believe. slash is amazing :DDD
aww i loves you too *hugs* :D
Heh, the whole 'after dream' thing was hilarious xDDD and i feel so bad for Hayley :(
update soon?! :D

Wait, no. Nathan runs to Matthew. svdhgsvafjbrkueg.

***Edit: When Matthew runs to Nathan. Dammit.

Another awkward ending. Sigh.

Honestly, I’m not a fan of colour-on-black layouts, but yours isn’t too bad. It’s readable! It irks me when people have like, neon writing on black. Hurts my eyes! Eeeeek!

Chapter one:
I like the natural relationship you’ve established between the brothers. It’s very realistic, and all the dialogue fits perfectly for them, I think. The lyrics included were also good. At first, I thought the character entering the apartment was female, as they were so repulsed by their brother watching porn and masturbating. Lulz. That’s awkward.

I la la loved the action scenes in the second half of the chapter. Although I thought it was a bit odd that the woman’s attacker gave up so easily. Wouldn’t he have gotten mad and attacked the person trying to stop him? Oh, but then he gets attacked by someone else. What’s going on? I liked the way Matthew described himself as some dumbass 5 foot 6, hundred and twenty pound midget. It made me smile (:

Chapter two:
Usually, I stop at certain parts in the chapter to write parts of my comment concerning it. Buuut, I couldn’t stop reading this chapter. My mouth was hanging open as I read, and everything felt so real to me. Wow. At the end I nearly cried. The only thing in this chapter I wasn’t sure about was the part when Nathan runs to Nathan and the police officer just lets him talk to him and stuff without questioning him. Wouldn’t he have asked who he was? Yeah.

Chapter three:
I have no words. I cried this time, dammit. I have a twin brother, myself. And yeah. It was all a lot to take in. Gah. On an unrelated note, Hayley Williams would be a kick-ass nurse. She’s so lovely.

Sadly, this is where our comment swap ends! Buuuut I’m not stopping my reading! I’m subbing. Yup. Prepare yourself for a comment attack. Oh.

Awkward ending.

do it do it do it you know you want to ;P more asap please love it

OMG YES I WAS RIGHT!!!! :DDDDDDD maybe you should wait one more chapter for sex, or, well, it depends on the sex xD great update :D

I KNEW IT!!!! omg!!!! and go for it xD

awwww poor Nathan that would've killed Matthew :(

amazing update, i loved this chapter so much. probably because i know exactly how nathan feels, just with a different situation. i loved how you elaborated on his pain this time, it gave the story into nathan's feelings to where we understand the pain he feels. amazing update(again haha) as always :) have fun while you're gone!

:O its a good chapter truely shows how much the event got to nathan update when you get back please :D have fun what your doing on the days away

'tonight i was escaping' what is nathan escaping from? i love this more please :D

i laughed at hottie XD
great update :) cant wait to read more!

i couldnt have been more off *facepalms* i love the emotion in the chapter poor Nathan hes taking it worse than Matthew

1. im good u?
2. papa rouch - the world around you
3. matthew and haley will get together :D
i love this i can imagine matthew and nathan cuddled up together asleep would be so cute aww
off to read other story now :D

1 I am sad today idk why though :/
2 Killer - Ravi Dhar and the Heartless :D
3 Hayley's gonna get reallly close to them both, i sense a relationship between her and Nathan, but she'd be cuter with Matthew in this story :3

the ending was really sweet :) that cuddling i sensed a little ~incest there haha xD but it's cute, how close they are :) this story is sweet, cant wait to read more!!!
(i shall check out that one shot (;!)

my day kinda sucked, the last song i listened to was Gucci Gucci by
Kreayshawn and i feel a love triangle coming on