Been to Hell - Comments

Nice way to end it. It sucks that Zane's been drinking more, but other than that I love it. I can't wait to see how the whole pregnancy thing turns out. Now I'm just questioning what it is the police want now!

I would love to see them have a big wedding haha I think Emily and Zane's inner thoughts would both be interesting to see. I love how they're finally alone and out of the damn hospital.

Author's Note: I'll try to see if I can get you some more readers if you'd like?

That's so exciting! They're finally out of the hospital! I'm sure they'll find something to do with the second bedroom.

Author's Note: Starting the third book depends on you and the story. If you think that it's time to start it, then start it. But if this one is close to an end then it might be a good idea to at least start thinking about it. Other than that, I can't say much

It sucks that they have to cut their hair and dye it, but at least it should help them in the long run. I like how Zane was during the movie. It made me chuckle haha

Happy Holidays!!

I can't begin to tell you how much I love this story.
I love how Zane is so protective of Emily. I loved this update and I can't wait for the next one! :)

Happy Holidays!

You're already on Christmas break?! :O Lucky!!
Great update. I love how Zane refused to let go of Emily's gurney, and how Charlie promised nothing bad would happen to her while he was gone.

This story just keeps getting better and better. I love reading it.
You're an amazing author. : } Keep updating. I check daily for new updates.

WHAT?! The army? ARE YOU FOR CEREAL?! He better not get shipped!!! I'll be p*ssed!!!

Wow they move around a lot haha I hope that they can take classes online. At least they'd be able to be together then. Hope all goes well for the two

I hope she's not pregnant with that man's baby. That would suck majorly. At least they're ok.

It's about time they're out of there! Hopefully Emily is ok and heals well fast.

Love the update!
I'm glad they finally made it out of the woods.

I swear, Zane makes me wish I was kidnapped just so I could fall in love with my kidnapper.. (If he turns out to be like Zane of course. :P)

I'll definitely be checking out your other stories. :)

I absolutely love this story.
I loved the update. I'm glad Zane and Emily are back together and I hope they find the road soon..

Oh, and the new layout is great! :)

Nice layout

One, I love the new layout.
Two, I'm glad Zane finally got his head screwed on right

I hope Zane kills him! Sorry, I'm violent. But the guy deserves it.

I would like for there to be a third in this series. It'd be pretty sick! :) I don't really care if you finish All At Once first or not.. There's my feedback for now :)

Well those two chapters were intense. I love it. Lots of intensity but I'm glad that Emily got Zane back and that they at least have a three day head start to run. Hopefully they get far and that Zane kills those people that are after them.

My thanksgiving was rather interesting. My mom got scoped when she shot her first deer. My little brother tried to beat me up. and I spent time with my friends and boyfriend and learned how to walk in heels.

I'm all jumpy from these past chapters, they have been so intense and I like it! haha
I just hope that they escape for good or get really far with their head start...

P.S Your holiday sounded wonderful! My family didn't know how to cook a turkey so we ended up buying chicken from Walmart. Then the only thing I bought on Black Friday was a 2 for 1 deal on socks :P

Thank God Zane isn't dead. I had a feeling that he was still alive I just didn't know where he would be. I hope he gets out of there, wherever there is, and kills them all. They deserve it for making their lives hell.

Those were some intense chapters! I can't believe Emily got kidnapped..again! That's unlucky.. I hope that Zain finds her soon, if he's still alive. If the guy that kidnapped her was someone who bullied her when she was in high school, what would he possibly want with her now?