Been to Hell - Comments

They're so cute together! It's adorable. I wonder why Phil just gave them a random bonus, that was rather generous of him.

Oooo...All At Once sounds interesting. I'd love to see what Zane was thinking throughout the whole thing. Can't wait!

I LOVE NIGHTMARE BEFORE CHRISTMAS!!! I wonder what's making Zane think like that.

Like Emily, I get a bad vibe from Ren. I wonder what scared her so badly. I hope things start to smooth out a little bit for Emily and Zane.

Like Emily, I get a bad vibe from Ren. I wonder what scared her so badly. I hope things start to smooth out a little bit for Emily and Zane.

That was a nice little chapter. I like how they kinda talked about their past and what not. I have a feeling that Emily and Zane are going to run into some trouble with his step-father if they run...anyways, I love it.

It's an awesome filler haha. I wonder how Zane knows Dexter.. This was great, as always. I love it, update soon

OMG! He finally proposed, that's so freaking awesome and adorable! I love it! I hope that they can be married soon and that someone finally catches his step-father.

I love this story. It's so intense. Holds so much suspense on what will happen next. I can't wait for you to update. : }

I hope that she doesn't die! Holy cow, there was some intense stuff in that chapter.

Aww, I enjoyed the end of that update and how Zane wanted to help clean Emily's wounds. :) It shows that he does care for her, in both the mental and physical way.

Hopefully though, wherever they're going, they won't run into the bastard. But I have a feeling they will, because he isn't gone yet, which makes me sad/mad because I really detest his character.

~Lady

I like how Zane is so eager to help clean Emily's wounds. I hope they don't get too bad, but I guess that that's why Zane wanted to learn, so he can help her more.

I wonder who Zane was yelling at. I hope that Zane and Emily can have a normal life soon. It'd be nice if they weren't in danger all of the time.

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I have this weird feeling about Peter. Last time they went with him, he brought them right to Zane's step-father. Who's to say he won't do it again?

He was acting a little weird in the last update, or at least I thought he was. So I wasn't really surprised when he removed her from the hospital. Hopefully though, nothing drastic will happen to her, otherwise, he'll regret it.

Honestly, they should leave the country with the bastard on their tails. They could jump the border and disappear completely off the face of the Earth. Change their names, everything. That's just an idea that's been crossing my mind since both of them had have problems with him. And it seems like Zane knew something was going to happen, or that his step-father was there, it just seemed weird how he got her out.

And the nurse should have went with them to breakfast, but maybe he bribed her or something.

~Lady

Well, that explains why Zane was so excited to go to breakfast.
I still wonder why the nurse didn't go with them..

She's not pregnant, that's good. Less complications.
I'm glad that Zane went back to her, I was hoping he would. He would be stupid to actually leave her.

Well, I am happy that she isn't pregnant, because that would have complicated things way too much. As for Zane leaving her, he shouldn't have done that, but human error always wins, at least he returned to her and didn't continue to be a jerk.

That's what's nice of him, he always returns to her even though she does something he doesn't agree with. It makes his character more likable. :)

I'm happy they worked things out though, because it would have been heartbreaking otherwise.

~Lady

He left?! I'm shocked, I know they were mad and all, but that's spur of the moment!
Update really soon!