Been to Hell - Comments

May be pregnant! That's going to make things interesting!

So I'm kind of up in the air about her being pregnant and all. On one hand, I hope she is, but on the other I hope she isn't. With all the bullshit that they're going through, I hope she isn't, but it would be nice if she was.

Interesting stuff, and I'm sorry it's short, I actually have to get going. But I liked the update. :)

~Lady

I absolutely love your story. You write with so much voice. I feel as if I'm a fly watching it actually happen. I enjoy reading it. I get so excited when you post a new chapter cause I can't wait to see what will happen next. : )

First off, I want to say that I'm sorry for not commenting, I haven't really been on Mibba at all over the weekend, with hurricane preparations, and being stupid yesterday and going to the beach to watch the waves.

Anyway, I have to say damn it! I thought that bastard is dead! He needs to either die, get killed, or fall off the face of the Earth.

Okay, enough of the angry rant. But I am displeased to find out that Zane's step-father is STILL alive. It doesn't make me warm and fuzzy on the inside, it makes me feel like I'm watching an episode of Criminal Minds.

Oh well, he'll die eventually I suppose, I mean, hope!

~Lady

What?! He's still alive?! That's going to pose some problems.

I like it. It's a nice chapter. Emily's leg is wrapped up so hopefully that will heal better and faster. Her dream, I'm still thinking about. Zane's an awesome protector, he's always there for her and doesn't let anything hurt her if he can help it.

That's a sweet reaction! (not that OMG that's sweet, but the romantic sweet) It's a smart thing that Zane kept them pills, Emily might need them later on too. I can't wait to see what you have in store next! :D

I'm shocked. I didn't think that Emily would admit that she was scared and now I'm so freaking curious to see what Zane's reaction is! Update soon, please. I really want to know what happens next!

I love it :)
Zane has Emily and she isn't hurt too bad. And now they're on the run from the cops, at least it isn't his step-father this time. I'm glad that he's dead. I hope that they don't have to be on the run for too long.

Oh man. He finally killed that jerk. Yay.

I love it :)

Damn it! Now I want to know what happened to her!

But I understand where you're coming from with a dying computer, so I will say that you left off in a nice place. But I'm still slightly upset that she ran off. I'm kind of like, what the hell? Where did she go?

All I can really assume is she didn't know Zane was coming after her, or she didn't realize it was him talking with his step-father's best friend (talk about a mouth full lol). Survival mode does funky things to the human brain, at least with how Hollywood portrays them. But I'm looking forward to the next update and where you'll be taking this sequel. :)

~Lady

I basically spent my whole day reading How to Save A Life, haha. I reaaaaaaaaally like it! Can't wait for more of this! (:

Ugh! I hate cliffhangers, but it's an awesome first chapter to the second book :)

I can't wait for this one! I hope I love it as much as I love How To Save a Life!

I'm super excited for this sequel! I loved How to Save A Life! :)