Oh, man. I don't even think there are enough words in the English language to express just exactly how much I hate Delia. Just... oh my God. I don't think I've ever really hated a fictional character as much I hate her. Seriously, I just want to wring that girl's neck! Every word that comes out of her mouth is just pure venom and I can't stand it that Abby has to out up with that from her on a regular basis. Especially with Delia blaming Abby for ruining her bachelorette party when the poor girl did no such thing.
On the flip side though, if I have to hear Abby say "sorry" one more time... my God. That girl really needs to grow a backbone. Like, yesterday. Let's just hope Brian can be the one who finally helps her to learn to stand up for herself.
I’m on my way to catch up on Drown, but I wanted to stop here first and beg for an update. :3 I don’t think you understand how much I love this story; it’s on my top list of favorite fanfictions ever and that means I need an update because I just adore it almost too much. I hope you find time to write something for this soon, love. You’re brilliant. <3
You make me mad, like so so so mad! Ugh, how is it possible?! This is a story! I’m not supposed to feel like Delia is real and want to beat her head against a wall enough times to have her orbs spill out! UGH! I hate Delia! I hate her, I hate her, I hate her. And holy fucking hell, I love Abby, but enough is freaking enough. She can’t honestly keep this up; it’s destroying her. Not to mention that she actually thinks Delia is right when she is the farthest thing from that. I swear if I were in her place I would have beaten her to the ground ages ago. Princess complex much? Hell no, NO! Go die in a dirty alley, bitch. Get the fuck lost. (I’m so sorry for cursing so much, but I’m dying here! D’: )
Brian is so perfect, though. :’) Like, seriously the most precious thing. If Abby would just let him in, she would finally know what happiness really is. But, alas, that doesn’t seem likely to happen soon. Not with Delia around, anyway. Can’t you like… kill her during her honeymoon? Some violent, inevitable accident? Hm? :3
Fine… I’ll stop with the homicidal thoughts for now…
YOU ARE A PRECIOUS WRITER! You make me hate you so much, though, Lynds. :( Stop making me cry. It’s always happening! Lucky you, you are super funny and sweet, or else I’d be a puddle of sobs and unhappiness for forever. :(
Damn someone needs to kick Delia's ass because she is way to far on her pedestal. And Abby is being attacked when she wanted to have fun and not feel so worthless because her family can't appreciate what she does for them. At least Brian stood up for her and I hope they spend more together! AWESOME UPDATE!!!!
I don't comment on many stories but I need to comment on this one. Usually when I sit down and eat dinner I read stories on mibba. I try to find ones that are finished because the anticipation of waiting on a new chapter of a great story kills me. Anyway, the other day I just said screw it and clicked on a story that wasn't finished, and I found this one. I am completely in love with this story line and the characters. I love your style of writing!! I hope you can update soon because I am obsessed!!! :)
Holy crap I really wish Abby would get a backbone and tell that fucking bitch of a sisters of hers to shut the fuck up already. Delia is just a spoiled cunt. I hope her fiancee stands her up at the altar, but then she'll find some way to blame that on Abby too
Sweet fucking Jesus I want to beat the ever-living SHIT out of Delia. I don't think I can remember the last time I ever hated a character this much. I actually glare at my computer screen when I read her name, that bad.
Bless Brian for sticking up for Abby though, God knows she needs someone to stick up for her. Poor girl. Loved the update!
Again, I didn't get an email telling me about this update. And that irritates me - Catalyst and Promise Me are my two favourite stories by you, and I almost missed both updates! Unbelievable!
I loved this. I love the relationship between Brian and Abby at this very moment. I love that he's protective of her and that he kisses her on the forehead, and I love that he was willing to stand there - the only man in a room full of girls - and turn his back on them all for her sake. Because, I think I've mentioned before, I just love when the guys fall into roles like that. Don't get me wrong - the romantic roles are fabulous - but nothing beats the protective best friend/big brother role for me. ^_^ So this was beautiful.
I live this storye! And I love how you're not rushing into things, I mean, it's chapter twelve and the girls are still in Vegas, and I can still keep up on the story, which seem to be quite hard for me atm - but yeah, I love this, please update soon again :)
first of all, I really missed this story. so thank you for updating!! <3
ugh, delia. she's like an evil step sister or something. I don't even know what I'd do if I had a sister like that. the saddest part is that no matter how badly abby gets treated, she still really cares about her sisters and it bothers her when they're angry with her. hopefully abby isn't too angry with brian and can just forgive him. he probably shouldn't have looked at her phone, but I don't feel like he did it to invade her privacy at all.
LOVED THE UPDATE!!! HATE, HATE, HATE DELIA!!! She needs a swift kick in the head and maybe a knife in the back :D just saying!! However, I love the fact that Brian defended Abby so quickly and with no hesitation. The boy cares for her, you can't deny that at all!!
I can't wait to read more :) nope, no I cannot!! x