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SOBBING FURIOUSLY BECAUSE KINGSLEY AND MAVIS ARE EVEN CUTER NOW
IF THAT IS EVEN POSSIBLE
WHICH I THOUGHT IT WASN'T BUT I GUESS IT OBVIOUSLY IS BECAUSE
OH GOD
MAVIS
AND
KINGSLEY
I CAN'T
UNABLE TO CAN
TOO MUCH TOO MANY FEELS UNABLE TO HANDLE THEM ALL
~~AHH~~
HE JUST UGH HE LIKE THINKS HE'S BEAUTIFUL ALREADY
I AM UNABLE TO CAN
TOO
MANY
FEELS
oh lord bless me i can't
she's pref
and he's perf
and they need to have many perf babies
TOO MUCH FEELS
AND SHE'S BLUSHING AND HE'S TOO BEAUTIFUL
I JUST
CAN'T
I CAN'T.
"He has perfect penmanship."
PERFECT PENMANSHIP
AND HIS EYES ARE HAZEL
~loses ability to can~
qrl do you know what you do to me
OBVIOUSLY NOT
oh my god
~dying~
MAVIS AND KINGSLEY FO'EVA
and his peanut butter
omg
my poor baby
mavis and him should cuddle yep
~crying crying crying crying excuse all my tears and feels i'll just go sit in the corner and sob recklessly because of how perfect this is oh god
~~beeteedubs this comment would have been posted yesterday but it was black friday and i had to go to work. but yeah
I DEMAND UPDATES TO PLACATE ALL THESE FEELS
#shamelesslyshippingminsley2012
yep they have a ship name already
no regrets~

UM
UM.
WHAT.
WHAT DID YOU DO OH MY GOD
WHERE DID THEY GO
ALL MY FEELS
FEELS EVERYWHERE AS I SOB BECAUSE YOU'RE STARTING OVER
EXCUSE ME WHILE I FILL MY FEELS CANYON OKAY
OK
i'll be back with more feels about this single chapter okay cool good talk

Carolina I love Kingsley and Mavis just as much as I love you
loljk no I love you so much more but still
I AM STILL SUPER EXCITED THAT YOU'RE REWRITING THIS
BECAUSE THAT MEANS YOU'LL BE MAKING IT EVEN MORE AMAZING<3

UGH THEY'RE SO CUTE
I LOVE THEM
MAVIS IS FRUSTRATED
KINGSLEY IS SEXUALLY FRUSTRATED
THIS IS PERF
I LOVE YOU
RACQUE YOU'RE PERFECT.
omfg Bee's comment
I can't
/dying
ANYWAYS
I WILL DEFINITELY UPDATE FOUT NOW. ;D
soon.
hehehoho.
BUT THIS WAS AMAZING.
please update soon? :3

~~tries to come down from panic attack because you updated and aldskfja;sdklf~~
YOU KNOW WHAT YOU DO TO ME WITH THIS STORY
I GET ALL EMOTIONAL AND MY FEELS ARE ALL
asdfjas;dlfjas
AND YOU'RE JUST LIKE
~whateva~
BUT BBY I CAN'T
I JUST
MAVIS NEEDS TO STOP BEING PERF
stop it stop it
AND JUST LET THEM HAVE A BUNCH OF BABIES
I MEAN
UM
PRODUCTIVE STUDY GROUPS
~awkward~
anyway
KINGSLEY NEEDS TO STOP BEING ALL HOT
AND MAVIS NEEDS TO STOP BEING ALL CUTE
AND YOU NEED TO UPDATE FREQUENTLY
PLEASE
AND THANK YOU.
c:

This chapter was adorable:)

OH MY GOD THEY'RE SO CUTE. ohasdklfchSDKLCJ;lkwejfl;k jI'M SO EXCITED FOR THINGS TO GET HEATED. OH MY GOSH. ;D
please
PLEASE
PLEASE JUST UPDATE SOON CAROLINA
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
AND SHE LIKES HIM WHEN HE HAS NO CLOTHES ON
I wanna rip his towel off.
BE STILL, MY HEART!
ugh
I honestly cannot wait for things to get heated because
a) I love me some student/teacher romance
b) I love me some heated student/teacher romance
c) I love me some Mavis
and d) I love me a LOT of Kingsley. c;
SO SERIOUSLY, CAROLINA. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

I THINK I'M GOING TO SUFFOCATE FROM ALL THE CUTENESS. They're so perrrrrrrrf <3

mavis.
omg. mavis why are you so cute mavis you're so adorkable and omg what. c:
why are they so cute and awkward and the shower thing
what
oh my god
WHAT EVEN
please.
let them.
do.
things.
._.
They're so cute and this is so cute and what do you mean in the author's note what DON'T GIVE ME FALSE HOPE RAQUEL D:
ugh.
~tears~
please update sometime in the near future. thanks. ;D

BROSEPHSKI.
hey.
um.
what.
i haven't even gone through the entire story yet and all i see is:
"No...no, I meant would you mind if I slept in your bed...with you."
WHAAAAAAAAAT PLEASE OH GOD
~ovaries~
okay i'm gonna finish reading now. c:

So sweet. I love this story.

BRO
HEY BROSEPHSKI
CAN YOU SEND SOME KLEENEX MY WAY
OH GOD
MY TEARS
MY BABIES
ARE ALL CUDDLY AND CUTE AND NOTHING HURTS BECAUSE EVERYTHING'S PERF
OH GOOD GOD
Okay, I'm done, I'll behave myself now.
First off, oh god
MAVIS PLEASE DON'T STOP BEING SO CUTE AND ADORBS AND UGHHHHHHHH
i lubb her ok.
I can't.
I JUST CAN'T CONTAIN MY EMOCIONES.
This story is perfect.
Kingsley is perfect.
His answers to Mavis's cute little questions are perfect.
Mavis is perfect.
Her little random makeout sessions are perfect too.
UGH.
CAN.
THEY.
JUST.
YOU.
KNOW.
GO OFF INTO THE FOREST AND LIVE IN A CUTE LITTLE CABIN AND HAVE CUTE LITTLE MOMENTS FOR THE REST OF THEIR DAYS
CAN THEY
PLEASE
ugh omg c:
i can't.
this is wonderful and asdklfjsaldkjf
can you like i don't know consider updating soon
for my sake
i mean
y'know
for the story
cough
kthnxbaiixoxo

Loveloveloveloved this chapter! I think your pace is perfect and they're adorable together. I can't wait for the next one :)

OH MY GOD UGH FRIGGING CAROLINA
YOU!
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH OHGOD ASDFHLAKSJDFHCLjksdfh;LKSDJF;Lksdfj
this chapter
I can't even, like
THEY MADE OUT
A LOT
AND TONGUED
A LOT
and and and omfg
HE'S IN LOVE WITH HER.
OH MY GOD.
but then again, who wouldn't be? c:
BUT STILL.
GD, THEY'RE SUCH A CUTE COUPLE!
please update soon, will ya Carolina? (:

I'm so happy to see this updated, aww Kingsley in love! Such a lovely chapter.

your story kills me at how amazing it is!
how dare you! :P
I await for the new chapter! <3 :D

OKAY
SO
UH
HOLD THE DAMN PHONE
AND SHUT THE FRONT DOOR
OH MY GOD
This is perfect but you already know that, and ugh, I'm sorry for being so nonexistent lately D:
BUT KINGSLEY IS PERF
AND MAVIS IS PERF
AND TOGETHER THEY'RE LIKE ONE BIG PERF BALL
I just...ugh.
I told you I thought that Kingsley would become all creepy-creepy and obsessed with Mavis--but y'know he's perf so it's a-okay--and LOOK. IT HAPPENED.
Why do I have a feeling that something bad's gonna happen?
hrm.
In any event, I'll continue to fangirl hard until that bad thing--which I don't know about but I feel might happen anyway--happens. I hope it doesn't and I can continue to fangirl as hard as I usually do.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, BROSEPHSKY.

I agree with the lady above ^^ Heartbreaker should deff go first.
I'm seriously loving this story. It's the kind of love that is so sweet to me. Perfection. (:

I think Heartbreaker should go up first. Both look like they're going to be great though. I love this story. I love how you put the chapters in his perspective as well, it adds a lot. Excited for the next update! =) <3 <3 <3

UGH OH MY GOODNESS THIS STORY IS SO PERF
I CAN'T EVEN LIKE
LASHDLKFJHALSDKJCHALSKDJFAS
and when she asked "say, can we kiss again?" or something I died.
please
pretty please Carolina
update soon? c: