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:D he said it! lol
Please keep updating I really like this story:)

Kingsley is adorable and totally amazing and dammit, they need to make love or something. Lol. But no, I adore this story and how it's not like the usual teacher/student romance type thing. No, it's different, it's realistic and it's purely AMAZING.
Ack.
You're wonderful! :)

I REALLY liked this chapter:)

I think this was my favorite chapter so far :) I like the fact that you are expanding upon Kingsley's internal conflict of liking Mavis... some stories don't address that fact and I feel as though theylose their believability as a result. I predict that: Kingsley is going to act upon his feelings for Mavis and lash out against her which will make her upset because she is a people pleaser therefore she'll try to confront him but he'll end up kissing her or doing something "inappropriate" (even though that's completely all right with mee (; ). How were those for predictions? (: Update soon!

WHERE ARE ALL THE COMMENTS FOR THIS STORY.
FUCK MAN Y'ALL SUBSCRIBERS NEED TO GET OFF YOUR LAZY ASSES AND LET MY BRO KNOW HER STORY IS THE SHIT OKAY.
okay, good talk.
ANYWAY~
KINGSLEY
please love me down.
PLEASE.
PLEASE.
UGH YOU'RE SO PERFECT EVEN THOUGH YOU AWKWARDLY STALK A STUDENT. It's okay though because I'm a student and you know if things don't work out with Mavis--if they don't I'll cry and just pitch a fit--I'm right here. ;D Just kidding, but no really, this is wonderfully written and I just love how he reads into the simplest things so much.
Like how she looked at him and how he made the whole Medusa comparison.
FIRST OFF
YOU SHOULD KNOW THAT GREEK MYTHOLOGY IS MY SHIT AND I LOVE IT MORE THAN ANYTHING SO THAT LITTLE THING RIGHT THERE WAS JUST THE SHIT BRO.
thnxbby.
OKAY
Cory and Gerald Boone, YOU CAN GO.
Thank you.
I don't like you, getting all up in here and making Kingsley more jelly than he normally is. BUT LOOK AT MY BABY TURNING HIM DOWN
four for you mavis coco.
Whether she wanted me or not, I was hers.
WHERE IS MY KLEENEX
GOD
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
and I CAN'T HANDLE MY EMOTIONS RIGHT NOW
and GOD THIS IS SO WUNDERFUL
and ugh why you do this to me?
King-a-ling?
FUCK MAN LYNN IS THE SHIT WITH THAT NICKNAME. c:
OH SHUT UP KINGSLEY
you don't hate her
you want that.
DON'T DENY IT
EMBRACE IT. ;D
fuck kingsley
stop being perfect ok thnx.

AND WHAT
WHAT IS THIS
IS THIS FO REAL
AM I ASLEEP
is that a dedication?
thank you sweetie! :D

This story is so cute and it makes me giggle and oh Kingsley. <3

I love it. I absolutely love it.

BROSEPH.
HEY
YEAH ITS ME HI.
Nanowrimo's keeping me busy, I'm afraid, but here I am! :D
This chapter was pretty much perfect, okay? I know I don't comment often enough and I don't say this often enough, but it was so perfect, you have no idea. IT WAS SO ASDKFAJSDFJ.
I JUST
UGH
IT WAS PERFECT.
As per usual, I'll quote my favorite part and fangirl over it, hope you don't mind.

Don't get me wrong, it was...beautiful on her - the way it naturally shaped and molded itself around the shape of her face, her bone structure - but it wasn't an every day aspect of Mavis.

I wasn't even aware of myself, reaching out to touch one of the shiny spirals, until it was entirely too late.

It was soft, surprisingly - I figured that hair so thick would almost feel wiry, but no. I pulled on it lightly, until there was no more curl to it, pinching it between my fingers. Then I let it go, watching in awe as it bounced right back into place, the strand curving in around itself again, underneath my finger tips.

And then I noticed she was staring at me, her hair in my hand. I smiled an apology, feeling like I just might die if I opened my mouth.

Can I just, ugh. Kingsley you are so perfect, ugh, let me love you. c: I want to say that a part of me fears how compulsive Kingsley's becoming towards Mavis. I mean, he devised a quick test just to be able to go check out her records, then touched her during a test. Kingsley my dear, you have a problem. But it's okay because she's fabulous and you're fabulous so yeah, can't complain. And the ending, I can just imagine him sitting there with the magazine and his cute little face and his blush and ugh oh my god
PLEASE LET THEM GET TOGETHER
EVEN IF IT'S JUST A DREAM
JUST DO IT AND MAKE ME HAPPY. c:

Lovely update:)

I can't wait to see how she responds in the next chapter :) Update soon!

such cute chapters!! great knowing what race Mavis is and good to know that she's bi-racial! you don't see that often here. anyways, can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Cant wait for the next chapter ; )

I love this story... each chapter is always so thoughtful and laid out. I can't wait for another update! =) <3 <3 <3

Great updated:)

Each chapter leaves me wanting more :) Update soon!! Can't wait for that dream to become reality ;) the kissing, not the screaming of coursee!

BRO.
BROZINSKY.
BROSEPH.
WHAT EVEN
I CANT EVEN
UGH
OH MY GOD
CAN I JUST
I LOVE THIS
AND YOU
AND I'M SORRY I'M SO HORRIBLE AT COMMENTING AND UGH I'M SORRY. :c

Cough, er, anyway, bro, here goes.
So first off, this is elegant in a short classy sort of way and I love it because of that. Can I just point something out please?
God, her eyes were gorgeous. Big and penetrating and honey when the light hit them and...and she had identical - and microscopic - green streaks near the rim of her irises.

You'd miss them, considering that you'd get caught up in the midst of the swirl of the honey. But they were there, and it was as engaging as anything came.

While I was looking at her, I'd gotten the staple to wiggle free.
Do you want to kill me or something? I mean, that's cool, 'cause I hardly ever comment because I'm a lazy bum but still really just ugh
KINGSLEY AND MAVIS GET TOGETHER NOW PLEASE.
Wait
gone
what
WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT.
:o
Okay so I'm just gonna sit here and wait for you update for me and make me happy and make Mavis and Kingsley get together and have a bunch of babies-
wait
i mean
be happy. c;

love it!!!(: I enjoy this story so much! Please updatee

ps. i have green veins on my wrists!

Veryvery well written :) I love all of the detail and truly can't wait for more!

well it's a good story congrats!

I love this story:)