OH MY GOODNESS. MAVIS, KISS BACK, YOU FOOL! ugh, I would've mauled Kingsley in a heartbeat. yum! c; OH CAROLINA, YOU'VE REALLY OUTDONE YOURSELF, THOUGH c: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I've been waiting for this chapter like craaazy! Yet again, the story didn't move too quickly and it was much more believable that she somewhat rejected him because of the conflicted feelings. I think you're doing an incredible job and I can't wait for the next chapter :)
WHEN HE PULLED THE STAPLE OUT OH MY LAWD MHM. I SAW HIS FACE. I SAW KINGSLEY'S FACE. MMMMMMMHM. I KNOW HE'S LUSTING FOR MAVIS. and her veins are green? o: CAROLINA YOU IS JUST AMAZING. AH-MEY-ZZZZZZZZZZZZING.
Carolina you're gonna see a lot of comments coming from me just for today 'cause I just found this, so. YOU FRIGGING GAVE ME CREDIT for a wave. a little time lapse wave. gosh, do you see the similarities in you and Mavis? I know I do c;
That awkward moment when Kingsley says he's not sexually frustrated and I'm just like, OH SHUT UP KINGSLEY AND GO GET SOME. Sigh. Can I just say that his sister and me should be best friends or something because she is just so spot on that it's uncanny? WAIT WHAT IF SHE KNOWS :O WHAT. IF. WAIT FUCK YOU KINGSLEY BEING ALL MEAN TO MAVIS AND SHIT That's not going to get you guys together. ugh. He's ruining my plan, raquel. SHUT UP CORY GOD WE DON'T EVEN LIKE YOU. WHATEVER. ~~moody teenager alert~~ Don't act like you're sorry, Kingsley. ._. wait oh my god YOU DIDN'T. OH MY GOD RAQUEL I CAN'T I CAN NOT HANDLE MY EMOTIONS AND it's so beautiful and nothing hurts and ugh. MAVIS AND KINGSLEY FOREVER AND EVER. that's all that needs to be said. update soon. c:
Ohmygod! :O Finally they're going somewhere. Get on Kingsley getting all hot, sweaty and kinky against the wall. It's about time he located his testicals! I can't wait for the next update :D
YUSSS. YOU GO KINGSLEY. PUSH HER UP AGAINST WALL AFTER WALL AFTER WALL- Whew. I am a MESS. This update made me flip a lid. I-just-and-WOWZA. You go Kingsley. You fucking go. Eeeeeeep , NOW I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONEEE! :3
Well written for a student teacher romance (many are plain crap). I must say, the Courage reference greatly pleased me. I freaking loved that show as a kid. That was a pretty good episode if I recall correctly. Keep up the good work!