It's very interesting! One of the most important things when you get into a relationship is communicating and it sucks that they have such hard time do to that. I really liked where you were going with this story but it looks like it's been quite a long time since you updated :/ I really hope you somehow manage to read this and come back to this story! It has so much potential! I love your character development and it was really awesome to actually see how much J is struggling with coming to terms with himself. The conflict creates really good character depth
February 7th, 2016 at 08:37pm