So I was brought here by comment swap, and while this isn't the usual plot that would catch my interest Im glad I got it. Your writing is really good and you make the characters and story realistic. Rory sounds totally adorable and I can't wait to see where this goes. The only complaint of sorts I have is that the jumps in time between the end of one chapter and beginning of another can sometimes make it hard to follow what's going on, for instance between the end of the party and later that night. I was really confused as to what was going on until you clarified it another chapter later. Otherwise this is really good, keep going.
So I'll admit; this isn't the type of story I would usually read. I'm not the biggest slash fan and it's just not the sort of plot that would catch my eye. That being said, I'm actually rather glad that comment swap gave me this to read, because it's actually really, really well written. Rory's character is very real and believable. I also don't think I saw any spelling/grammar mistakes. Great job!
Short chapter? That was awesomely long. I really love this. It's like those two can never catch a break! I wish Jason wasn't so bad at communicating his issues, he always just runs out! I can't for more
"The awkward silence was bothering me, and I was deaf!" Tehehe that made me giggle. Why was Jason pissed? Hm. Ummmm they're cute and this story is awesome. Thanks for all your hard work!
I am appreciating the chapter cnsidering I get how hard typing is via touch. It's wayyyy too easy to make mistake. But please please please some romantic action pwease. Like kissing. Kissing is hot. Also I am still very much in love with this story so yay.
Really adorable story, seriously. I like how you made it believable that Rory was deaf. I've read other stories where the main character has been totally deaf, but sometimes the author slips and starts writing about how the character hears someone in another room speaking. It was nice to see some consistancy for a change. A little fast paced for me, but all in all very good and with a nice plotline. Keep going! :)
this story is absolutely adorable! firstly i love a good slash (who doesn't!), and just little details make this really nice. i love how you put the ASL for rory at the beginning, and i love the little touches like him playing in the band anyway and stuff like that.
it's really cute and rory sounds like a total babe! so adorable. also jason, pretty dishy too! <3
Awww that was too adorable :) I really love this story, it's so realistic and different and funny and cute. I love that he laughed and Jason's feelings. Can't wait to read more