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  • lovepop32

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    so happy that they finally kissed...hopefully neither 1 of them try to say it was a mistake...great story though
    August 2nd, 2012 at 03:47pm
  • LaRawra!

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    Is there going to be an update soon?
    July 27th, 2012 at 11:45am
  • emerald_envy

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    So I was brought here by comment swap, and while this isn't the usual plot that would catch my interest Im glad I got it. Your writing is really good and you make the characters and story realistic. Rory sounds totally adorable and I can't wait to see where this goes. The only complaint of sorts I have is that the jumps in time between the end of one chapter and beginning of another can sometimes make it hard to follow what's going on, for instance between the end of the party and later that night. I was really confused as to what was going on until you clarified it another chapter later. Otherwise this is really good, keep going.
    July 6th, 2012 at 09:02am
  • squidward tentacles.

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    So I'll admit; this isn't the type of story I would usually read. I'm not the biggest slash fan and it's just not the sort of plot that would catch my eye. That being said, I'm actually rather glad that comment swap gave me this to read, because it's actually really, really well written. Rory's character is very real and believable. I also don't think I saw any spelling/grammar mistakes. Great job!
    June 24th, 2012 at 01:44am
  • matthuee.

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    Oh I love this story so far! Rory's such a doll! Wonder who that random creepy guy was though LOL.
    Jason and Rory are so awkward it's funny.
    June 17th, 2012 at 12:39am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    Short chapter? That was awesomely long. I really love this. It's like those two can never catch a break! I wish Jason wasn't so bad at communicating his issues, he always just runs out! I can't for more
    June 16th, 2012 at 07:26pm
  • jennylake74

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    "The awkward silence was bothering me, and I was deaf!" Tehehe that made me giggle. Why was Jason pissed? Hm. Ummmm they're cute and this story is awesome. Thanks for all your hard work!
    June 16th, 2012 at 03:29pm
  • LaRawra!

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    I'm one person who recommended this. :D Nice update.
    June 16th, 2012 at 03:04pm
  • revivall

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    I am appreciating the chapter cnsidering I get how hard typing is via touch. It's wayyyy too easy to make mistake. But please please please some romantic action pwease. Like kissing. Kissing is hot. Also I am still very much in love with this story so yay.
    June 16th, 2012 at 12:17pm
  • AllTimeLoverJess

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    Hi, I just discovered this story and I find it totally amazing and adorable! Please keep it going! Please! Please! ;)
    June 10th, 2012 at 07:34pm
  • WondrousSerendipity

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    Really adorable story, seriously. I like how you made it believable that Rory was deaf. I've read other stories where the main character has been totally deaf, but sometimes the author slips and starts writing about how the character hears someone in another room speaking. It was nice to see some consistancy for a change. A little fast paced for me, but all in all very good and with a nice plotline. Keep going! :)
    June 10th, 2012 at 06:18pm
  • daisyfairy

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    this story is absolutely adorable! firstly i love a good slash (who doesn't!), and just little details make this really nice. i love how you put the ASL for rory at the beginning, and i love the little touches like him playing in the band anyway and stuff like that.

    it's really cute and rory sounds like a total babe! so adorable. also jason, pretty dishy too! <3
    June 10th, 2012 at 01:44pm
  • jennylake74

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    This story is soooo cute! I love Rory so much :)
    May 22nd, 2012 at 02:30am
  • Nicole_789

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    Can I keep him ... Rory I mean ;( pleaseeeeee
    May 21st, 2012 at 11:21am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    Awww that was too adorable :) I really love this story, it's so realistic and different and funny and cute. I love that he laughed and Jason's feelings. Can't wait to read more
    May 21st, 2012 at 04:25am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    :) Hahaha, I love Rory
    March 14th, 2012 at 09:59pm
  • revivall

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    update soon pleaseee as in tomorrow or s/t o;
    March 14th, 2012 at 11:23am
  • LaRawra!

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    Jason's gay?!
    March 10th, 2012 at 05:42am
  • Jeska

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    This is so adorable, I love it. :D
    March 6th, 2012 at 06:43am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    :) So adorable. Last chapter was really coool, ending was interesting and funny. Can't wait to read more
    March 5th, 2012 at 11:26pm