I Need You - Comments

Haha well, I'll admit that my face would've been on the keyboard, if not for the fact that I was jumping around my room in total complete happiness cause Hale woke up! :P My brother's room is across from mine, and since I was supposed to be doing homework... well... He was looking at me like 'What the hell is she on?' ya know?
Conner sounds like such a cutie! Zekey's in love~! They sound like they'd be perfect together ^.^ It's a good name for him, and your welcome for the suggestion :)

Hale's awake and Raine's happy and Zeke's feeling better!!! Awesome. :)

YOU USED CONNOR!!! :] For some reason, I think the name totally works with the new guy (who is Zeke's cute little true love haha) Seriously, I love Connor already, and I am so sure he will be the perfect guy for Zeke. I'm so glad that he's not a douche bag, and appearance wise he is totally bangable *creepy wink* And I agree with you, using Parker would have been AWK-WARD! Yeaaahhhh...
I haven't gotten my daily allowance of Raine in two whole months, and it seems to have made me soft and squishy. I absolutely love that line haha I was, like, squealing the whole time (no joke, my brother is currently thinking that I was adopted, I mean, how could I be related to him?) Anyways, I really did like that sentence! Hale is the bomb.
And I know I should totally stress this more, but HE WOKE UP! T_T <--- tears of happiness
I enjoyed the way you described how he woke up- most people don't write from the comatose person's point of view, so this was totally awesome! I could imagine his mental strain, and I was cheering him on all the way. <3
AND I JUST WANNA HUG YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW! *virtual hug* Yay! I get to be Raine's bridesmaid! CAN I HELP HIM PICK OUT THE DRESS?! lol Kidding, kidding. Raine in a poofy wedding dress... *weird image in head* Okay, erase, erase. That was one of the weirdest things I've ever imagined.
But yeaaahhh! I'm gonna be one helleva bridesmaid! They say that there is a bridezila, but what about bridesmaidzilla (that doesn't even flow... meh, oh well, you get the point!)
I'll be looking forward to their wedding; it is sure to be the cutest thing I've ever read!
Oh, and I don't pre-write stuff either lol I just... can't. I just hop on and then BAM, write up a chapter that is hopefully good he he
And thanks for considering the idea of checking out my stories; it would mean a lot to me, since you are an awesome writer :]
Ermm, and just being a little bit annoying, I have always wondered what the characters in your story look like, so I was wondering if you had picture of 'em, could you post them? :] I wanna see Hale/Raine's face lol
Well, I'm done for now! I'll give you another essay when you update, which will be soon, RIGHT?! ;]
I love this story, and I love you for writing it and being generally cool :3
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HE'S WAKING UP!!!!!!!! Man, I just love Hale and it's just like... well... I can't even explain it, it's that good!... and I suck with words, but still!
If I were in the room with those reporters I woulda kicked them out or not even let them in! Poor Raine, his depression came back :( He's too cute to annoy him so much to that point! How dare they do that!
Zekey-boy is horrible at thinking before doing, sometime he needs a nice little slap on the back of his head (not too hard though) to get him in line! Names for his new love? How about... Anthony or Matthew? Hehe just thinking :)
Good luck picking when more suggestions are up :P

Wait for it...

AWEIUHALIUWHLAIWUEHLIHOLYMOTHEROFGODDAEWUGCLAIWUCHALWIUCHEWALIFCUE!!!!!!
I think I just died of happiness. Like, honestly, my heart just went BOOM when I read that Hale... squeezed Raine's hand. T_T <--- tears of joy lol
I like Zeke again, yeah, I know, I can't hold grudges very well. That boy is just too good, despite his previous mistakes and jerkish behaviour. I just weeped a little when you wrote how bad he felt, I was like "Oh, Zeke, I forgive you" and then did an awkward imaginary hug with him. I am also super happy you're giving him someone to love, and who hopefully will love him back just as much! I'm still wracking my brains for a name, so bare with me haha
The news reporters were ANNOYING, and I was close to smacking them with a banana. Can't they see that Raine is uncomfortable and sad? I mean, how dare they pester someone so kind, gorgeous and amazingly adorable? *hugs Raine super tightly* I wub Raine. :3
Aaaaannnddd I can not wait for a wedding. Can I be a bride's maid? *hopeful look* Kidding, kidding (kind of...) But yesss, I just want Hale to wake up and to hold and kiss Raine all day long!
Oooh, and I got a name for ya, but it's not good (I suck balls at names, I kinda let baby name generators do the work lol):

Parker, Flynn or... or... blegh, wait, I have another one *thinks really hard* Connor. Eh, whatever. They're pretty bad, but there's some names for thought! :P
Well, my awesome writer and pen pal (he he), please update as soon as possible, because I need more Raine and Hale cuteness to eat up!
Until next time!
xx

Aw, aha, now I wanna go up and give Raine a big fat womping hug.

Yeah yeah -_- better ask for forgiveness....lol jk!!! Loved this chapter!!!! It was awesome to see hales point if view!!!! But u kill him off I swear I will unsubscribe to all your stories!!!!!!!!! Unless something cool happens like he comes back to life when yuh know YOU AREN'T LAZY! ha jk again u update really fast actually so I applaud u :D or whatever it is they say XD and yes very male for the record XD

Awww, Hale deserves a great big hug.

*giant puppy dog eyes* All is almost well now! O◡O
It's so sweet when Raine sings and talks and then Hale's all like 'I love him so much and my heart races when he speaks <3'.
I feel sorry for Zeke. I mean, he's been kinda mean in saying that, but he doesn't deserve to be totally unhappy! He used to be Hale's best friend! O◠O Poor Zeke

YEEAAAHHH!!! THE HEART MONITOR NEVER LIES!!! ^_^
That was so freaking adorable haha I just love how Hale's heart speeds up just when Raine says something... and gosh, Raine singing just broke my heart, in a good way haha
And I'm glad the sticky tape worked! haha ;] I think I used a bit of super glue in there too, so keep that in mind :3
And yeah, the organ thing would suck, because I don't want both of those gorgeous boys to die! T_T And I'm so glad Hale's kinda alive... and please don't kill him off. WHO ELSE IS GONNA HUNT DOWN ZEKE AND SMACK SOME SENSE INTO HIM?!
But yeah, I don't completely hate Zeke... I feel kinda sorry for him, actually... Oh gosh, I wanna hug Zeke as well :] But mostly Raine and Hale, because those boys are so tough and loveable.
Well, update as soon as you can, and I hope you liked this comment/essay haha :]
And remember- SMILE!
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I hate you -_- hale!!!! My baby why?????

Ahah yeah, I feel like this username suits me better... and Happy Birthday!! =)

Man this IS really twisty, I don't know if it's good or bad though... I mean, HALE!!! So not happy with him being so close to death T.T I'm gonna wish upon a star that Hale magically gets better because of the magical starry powers, and it's gonna work dammit! It's gotta work! THE STARS HAVE POWERS! And I totally feel sorry for Raine and their mum, it's just like, ''Why can't everything be alright and they're in a cheesy happy story where everything is cliche?" T.T

I'LL GIVE HALE ALL OF MAH ORGANS AS LONG AS HE'LL LIIIIVVEEEE!!! *gets out hacksaw to chop out my liver and my lungs*
Ouch... maybe that's not a good idea, but seriously, I don't want Hale to die! T_T
You don't need to persuade yourself to keep him alive- you KNOW he has to live! Hale is the sweetest, kindest most loving boy in the universe, and Raine has already been though so much I don't think his amazing heart can take any more *tries sticky-taping Rain's heart back together*
I love those boys so much, they love each other with everything they have, and I think the saying goes like this: LOVE CONQUERS ALL.
So, therefore, they're love will make Hale's soul stay planted right in his (sexy) body and he will live and wake up and love Raine for ever and ever. <3
Oh a happier note (well, somewhat happier, I mean, I'm BAWLING my eyes out right now T_T), I am glad my comments make you laugh haha
That's partly what I live for!
And I'm guessing what i wrote in my bio says that we're pretty alike? O.O Awesome! And I love you too, in a completely non-awkward way :P
And I have listened to falling in reverse- and in the simplest words that I can muster, I must say that they rock this world ^_^
You are an amazing writer, and I hope this comment makes you stop crying and laugh instead haha
ANNNDDDD... HAPPY BIRTHDAY! *gives you a virtual birthday present and a big big big big BIG hug*
You are an amazing writer, so please update soon, and please let Hale be okay. Not just for his sake, but for all of your readers, but mostly for Raine. I love them both so much.
Until next time!
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You. Bitch.
If Hale dies, I'm gonna cut you with a freaking Elven sword.

*dies a little on the inside*
NOOOOOO!!! HALE! RAINE! ZEKE!
Why, Zeke? WHY?! I thought you were a nice guy! Why did you have to be so selfish T_T
Please let Hale be okay... geez, you made me cry now! *sniffles*
I don't want little Raine to hurt so much...
Please update soon. I need to know what happens soooo badly!
xx

Totally love your story! <3
My favorite character is Raine.
He just sound alike the perfect guy to me.
Hope you update soon.
I am officially one of your readers. :3

Woot woot! Threesome! So damn sexy haha ;]
Seriously, your story is so captivating and it makes me just wanna read more and more and more!!
So, you know the drill- Update ASAP! :]
I love it!
xx
p.s. My favourite character at the moment would have to be Hale. He is a darling! :3

*squee!* Man! I feel so bad for Zeke! I feel like he's my favourite character, but there's something about the twins that is just adorable! Raine's always in a happy mood, and then it sucks when he's oblivious about something important, and then Hale's just thinking about others while things are happening.

Do you have plans for this story? 'Cause there's gotta be some twists, and I might have one in mind. :P

This is... I've never read a story like this. Oh god the heartache! It reminds me of when I agreed to be in an open relationship w/ my first boyfriend and first love, but that was just horrible b/c he never really chose me - we were just close friends. God I feel so bad for Zeke!

I feel bad for Zeke. And Hale.
Because they both know that it will never work, yet they're still going along with it.

Ohmygod I thought this story was DEAD