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AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!<3

I liked that chapter. Mallory is pretty cool.

Not only is Mallory a darling, she's devious as well. Seriously, New Year's will take about twelve seconds. See? Forethought, it's a good thing.

I finally caught up! Yes!
Everest is a bit terrified, isn't he? It's kind of like he expects everything to go completely amiss, like he's used to it by now. Which doesn't make too much since, because I don't think he has any reason to be used to it. I mean, sure Lucas left him once, but that's hardly enough times to get used to it. Or maybe he still doesn't completely trust Lucas? It seems like he needs contstant reasurance of everything, even if he's already been assured. As is he'll need to be reassured of Locus's love every time he wakes up.
Or maybe I'm crazy, I don't know.
On the other hand, he called Everest his everything! He's like the opposite of Everest, he's completely sure about it all. No one could made him doubt anything.

Uh! I messed up! So close! Must.....try....again

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Blowjobs fix everything. Fact of like. Angry? blow job. Sad? Blowjob. Suicidal? Blowjob. Depressed? Blowjob. Sore Penis? Blowjob. They sooth.
With this logic, it's easy to believe that there are more depressed women in the world than there are men.
Is it just me, or does anyone else think that Lucas should have given Everest a piggyback ride? I mean, why not? If Lucas wants Everest to have a good time then travel in a fun way. Nothing is a more fun way to travel than by piggyback ride.
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Doesn't that look like fun?

-22-
"Before, he would have just bitched at me for not getting a bag of Doritos too."
Best line. Talk about spoiled, and James likes to do it. I couldn't stand that, that bitch would be off his ass, in the car, and buying his own damn Doritos. If he didn't have the money he better cut up some clothes and go stand on a corner. Doritos my ass.
Aside from that, I can see this dog being a total cockblock in the future.
'Luc, it's so harry..... and already wet...We didn't even use the lub yet.
'Ev, I'm still wearing pants...'
Eh? Eh? Get it? No? It's okay, it was a bad joke anyway.

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See? I'm not the only one who was thinking there were going too fast.
But hold the fucking phone just a hour! Lucas had other boyfriends! I thought he parent's hated Everest because he wasn't rich and had a dick? Why was he dating other guys? I mean, come on, how many rich gay guys are there really? And didn't he say he's liked Everest for awhile? I'm not saying you can't date someone when you like someone else, especially when you only see them once a year, but dude. Other boyfriends. And it totally go over Everest's head.
Pft, lovestruck. I'll never understand.
Oh, and happy day-after birthday!

Hey, amazing story, cant wait for more!

Yaaaaaaaaaaay!! :)

Well Mallory's a darling isn't she? I suppose it's to be expected if she's related to Lucas, though.

Oh, and I don't like children so I can't fathom why he'd want one when he is not obligated of pressured at all to have one. Then there's the explanations, the adoption, the diapers, the whining, the rest of the baby shit. Greh.

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OH! So he doesn't want to get married but he wants a fucking baby!?
Goddamnit Lucas, get your priorities straight. Chronological order man, chronological!
Dang, everything kinda zooms by in this story, except the sex of course. A few weeks and he's got the guy back, a few days and there's blow jobs, a few more days and he already has a house, a few hours and they're going on vacation! Is this a runaway train or completely and totally safe?
I wounder what Everest chose to watch on pay-per-veiw. coughcough.
I love how there's always the stereotypical brohug. Fuck race! Fuck Age! Fuck gender! Brohug!

I can't specify in any detail what it is about this chapter that I like, but I feel bad when you don't get comments so ...

For some reason I was under the impression Tyler was a golden labrador ...

They're so cute together! I can't take it xD

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I like Everest's scrabble takings. And his showering tactic. And his ice skating tactic. Maybe he should just become a marine, but these killer tactics to good use. But I bet that'll give me a lot more reading material to fall back on too.
I think they should just say "fuck it" and shag like jackrabbits. Am I going to have to wait until they get their love nest? The sexual tension is suffocating.
Oh, and I hate you Casey. I hate you so much.

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What the actual fuck!?
Lucas doesn't even seem to like the idea of being married to Everest one bit! Not in the slightest! He seems appalled by the whole fucking idea! And then he can just go and kiss Everest like he hadn't just be scared of thinking of spending his whole life with him.
Pft, that's shit. He should at least feel a little bad.
Of, and Everest's gift is just so damn cheesy! I love it, but he's so.... god. It's so bad it's cute.

Grah, am I a bitch? I'm a bitch, I'm four chapters behind. Ech, I'm sorry! I'm gonna catch up soon, I promise!

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I love it when legs wrap around waists! Like.... if that never happened then I would never write stories with love or affection in them. I swear, I only do it so I can wort up to the wrapping legs. I'm not even kidding.
I do think that it was more a gift for Lucas than Everest, but with Everest's reaction I think otherwise. Lucas basically bought him a fuck pad/sexy hide out/shagging quarters/lover nest. How great of a present is that? But that house dose not look at vintage as I hoped! I expected secluded, kinda faded, cozy, with overlooked beauty. But that bright, lively, in your eye lovely is amazing too!

Awwww that chapter was cute!

How do you guys not get comments?!?! It's like an offense to the world. I haven't had internet access for a while so that's my excuse, but seriously? A whole chapter without comments?

Everest's gift to Lucas was so perfect I was jealous. Ev and Luc ice skating was adorable and I love how they both let themselves get carried away with their thoughts and they don't realise the other is thinking the exact same thing.