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defiantly the best gift for Everest

AWWWW YEAH HE'S STAYING >:)

^^^ Sorry, it's double. Damn thing didn't submit.

I wanna know what Everest got for Lucas. That's the present I wanna see. Also, a house? Wow. Jealous much.
I love how these two go so perfectly together. It's adorable.

I wanna know what Everest got for Lucas. That's the present I wanna see. Also, a house? Wow. Jealous much.
I love how these two go so perfectly together. It's adorable.

OMG! that was the perfect gift!

I began reading this and the one thing that registered with me was Or maybe it's those damn tights he was wearing earlier. Where'd the tights go? How and when were they removed? Hopefully with teeth. Teeth are always a enjoyable way to remove items of clothing. That's not just my opinion, that's a fact.
When you mentioned lion I automatically imagined Everest biting Lucas. Just, teeth marks everywhere and erotic groaning. Like a soothing kinda violence, if that makes sense.

awwwwww so so so cute!!!

They're so cute x_x

Seeeexxxy time :3
Thought I'd stop being a silent reader and actually comment!
I love Everest's name, it's so cute.
Updaaate sooon?

Everest was actually offended, like he dressed up just for Lucas, awww. And then the casual thought on kids - also awww.

They are so cute together omg x)

awwww horny everest is cute

Nicole won't update on time, she'll probably wait a month then start writing the chapter. and after she takes forever to write the chapter, she won't proof-read and post it anyway. Or, at least, that's what she does to me.
Everest should have slapped his ass back. Like slapped da ass. Multiple times. As punishment. Then tied him to the bed..... with a ball gag. But, first, they need to find a dictionary for unusual safe words. Don't want any mishaps or accidental elastrating. Or, ya know, they could 'snuggle' in Lucas's room. Everest doesn't seem too object to snuggling. Everest should just buy a whole slew of multicolored tights so he can have unlimited cuddling whenever he wants.
Anyways, I love how Everest was actually offended. Just like 'hey, you worked your ass of to get me and you're not oggling? What the fuck man?" God, Lucas is just so freaking charismatic he makes people want to drop their pants right then and there. Not to mention how fast he got everyone to forgive him. He must have taken lessons or something. Or, his job involves communication, right? (I don't know, I'm guessing) if it does, I guess it makes sense that he's good with people.
But, uh, yeah. You're safe. This time.

I've already commented on fourteen, this is for thirteen. I really do like Everest, I may like him more than Lucas, just a touch more. So, no Ev, running all the way back to the inn was not because you wanted to see Lucas again - it was for the cocoa.

Favorite line from this chapter: "My mom made chicken." I don't know why, I just love this line. I'ts just like, of course. Of course. This is Nicole's chapter after all, what else would she make?
For some reason I feel like Everest's father forgave Lucas too fast. Like there should have been a bit of resentment then forgiveness. But maybe that's me in the mind set that Everest is a teenage girl. I don't know.
This proves it! Dressing up will always gain some sort of par rental approval! Just try it, they will be bowing down to you. Well, okay, way too much of a over-exaggeration, but whatever.
Lucas, Everest said he wanted to take it slow. No sleeping with him until after he goes against himself and starts dry-humping you on the kitchen table. Don't worry, it probably won't be much of a wait. Haha, it's like the beginning of a Christmas smut.

-Chapter 13-
As I stated in the last comment, Lucas has already grown balls. If he grown anymore the NBA might be suing him for theft. Everest might have a hard time castrating that. Wait, balls have sperm. If his balls are that fucking big then that's a lot of sperm. My god, Everest's ass would explode! The condom would break before he was even halfway done! Holy shit!
Is it just me, or did Everest sound a bit... down in parts of this chapter? Like when he said everyone takes him for granted. It kinda sounds a little whiny to me, maybe a little (I only use this because I can't think of another word) emo. Like, that's cool, he's just saying what he knows/he's noticed. But I was wondering if I was just insane or if anyone else saw this.
Lucas's parents sound be ashamed! They lost bother of their children because they're such jackasses! God, how the fuck can they live with themselves!? Just fuck that shit! Damn it all to fucking hell!

-Chapter 12-
Well what the fuck it this!? They act like Lucas is so goddamn unfilial. What the fuck! It's not like he's out there pissing on your cars('cause you know arrogant bitches like that have more than twenty cars), killing your chiwawas('cause you know arrogant bitches like that have to have chiwawa), and burning your crosses('cause you know arrogant bitches like that are christian.). He's just fucking gay!
God, grow some fucking bawls and learn to live with the fact that your son is gay! I mean, really! He's not going to start having gay sex on the kitchen table!......well, okay, maybe. But not while anyone is there! He's not going to start shoving dildos down your throat or trying to bound and fuck you, he just wants to do it to other people. Preferably Everest. God fucking shit, what the hell?
Lucas, you fucktard. Why did you keep it? What are you even thinking? You are not going with them, and if you are you better have Everest in your fucking travel on(travel on and not suitcase so he can have some, coughcough, entertainment on the flight).
But, I must say, I commend Lucas on being able to walk, much less straight, with the amount of balls in his pants.

that was cheesier than my cheese pizza...and that pizza had 6 kids of cheese.
but, yknow, of course i loved it!

What is he gunna do :o I need to know. Update!