Fun ways to get back at your brother - Comments

What a great chapter!

One of my favourite part's was how Mikey was just being an idiot and annoying Gerard by saying he fucked his friend, and then Gerard gave the whole thing away. He is a shocking liar.

On the plus side, this little Mikey being angry at them both might make them come together because they'll only have each other. You know, they'll team up! Hehehe.

Verrrrrry good update, always SO entertaining.

MICHAEL JAMES WAY!
HOW DARE YOU PUNCH FRANKIE!
goshh.
I was laughing all through that chapter and then BAM!
*insert a very angry expression on face aimed at Mikey*

Apart from my obvious annoance with Mikey for punching dear, poor, innocent (pfttttt. as if) Fwankie, Great chapter hun.

:D

great update

More when you can please!!!

YEAH they like each nother! No denying it now.. HA I'm so glad Mikey got in trouble.

*sigh*
I just wish their parents would realise how intelligent Gerard is! Why does he have such a shitty job??

more soon :D

xoxox

omg i love this story sooo much. it just gets better and better every chapter! i like the fact gerard is slowly losing control of himself over Frank. i knew he wouldnt tell mikey straight away about him and frankies fling, i know he enjoyed it deep down and if he told mikey then theres a one in a million chnace of it happening again. Get in there frank and gerard! i just hope neither mikey or gerards parents dont catch them!!

i hope u update sooon!!! xx

fantastic story, more soon please, *subscribes*

Dude, this is fucking great!
Your writing is really amazing and they story is great! I love it!
*Subscribes*
Keep up the awesome work!
xoxo

hahaha wow this is great x]
and gerard is.. ahhaha i don't even know x]
but i don't like mikey somuch >< aw
keep up the great work!
:D:D

yummy!

Aww, thanks for the, well, thanks! Put a smile on my face.

I practically burned rubber on my mouse pad trying to open this when I got the email saying it had been updated.

The opening conversation was great, and seeing Gerard almost back peddling when he realised that he had'nt planned to possibly even tell Mikey was interesting to read. After reading it I realised that I never actually expected him to either.

“Yeah actually I do know how hard you worked for that. I read all about the things you lead your research team to achieve. I found it pretty fucking amazing actually.”
Read that made me incredibly angry with his parents. Yes, he is a smart arse, no question, but if they would just look a little deeper then they would realise a hell of a lot more about there son.

Gerard was almost certain someone must have heard it when he slammed Frank’s back against the laundry door, but he continued anyway.
I litterally cheered when I read that. I was'nt sure how you going to make the, well for lack of a better word 'relationship' continue, but that was just perfect. No heavy discussions, no claims and no promises. It just happened.

So glad that Mikey has finally been caught out on what really happened at there Dad's ceremony.

Cannot wait to see what happens between them. I love the ineraction between the characters. Most stories you read, when it comes to certain characters holding a conversation, a lot of people turn off to it losing interest, but here that never happens.

I litterally can't wait for what will fall out of each character's mouth.

ok this was insanley brilliant!!!

more, more, more please lol!!

this is a great story and i cant wait for more im so happy a friend forward me to this..

cheer's cat!

“Oh, don’t be silly Mikes, it’s not your clothing. It’s just you.”

I found this last night and after reading all five chapters, I'm still laughing about it.

You've captured Mikey and Gerard's relationship brilliantly, and in the most comical way.

I love how you write Gerard to be rather unhinged.

Gerard invaded his mother’s personal space, dipping his head close to her ear to answer her. “I’m not wearing any panties.”

There are so many lines in this that honestly cracked me up, something that has not happened to me with a story for a while now. And it's humour that is at least realistic. An added bonus.

The whole conversation that takes place when Gerard and Frank return from the bus trip is priceless. So many things that spill out Frank's mouth is pure genius. (I adore the "Let's touch a little.") comment and Mikey's encouragement.

There mother thinking that Gerard has finally lost it is another brilliant moment. And the conversation that ensues from the dildo, her revelation that she thought him to be gay, to her saying how she's surprised no one had hit him sooner were classic.

Mikey's reaction to his mother's remark about the oreos is exactly what everyone is thinking: “Are you serious? LOOK AT ME!” and “Yeah, so buy me some fucking ‘Oreo’s’!?”

Honestly, I could sit here all day and tell you how much I loved it, but moving on. :)

The best line and what I think is the one that stands out of the entire story is..

“I want you to fuck me, Frank. I want you to fuck me like you need it.”

Holy Shit.

Those two entire chapters are just amazing. They just completely blew me away. Just at how realistic it is reading wise and how you went into detail when it was needed but never loosing sight of anything at all.

And the sex...Fuck. Mindblowing.

I'm officially now a fan, both of this story and of you. And finding out your an Aussie too, just puts the icing on the cake. :)

Cannot wait until the next chapter.

dude i love this story so fucking much man! i cant belive its only chapter four its progressed so damn well !!! please try to update sooner because im in love with it! so ayway imm a huuuuuge fan continue wat ur doing!! xxx

lahhh.. this is hot, keeps it up.

Great update

More when you can please!!!

o_O
oh dear.
yummmmmmmmy.
Lip Treatment aye.
*looks at lipbalm* *bursts out laughing*
i will never look at chapstick the same way again.

:)
loved it .
loved it.
loved it.
made me laugh yet again.... and also perhaps drool at times?
haha.

XX

Waw..

that was so hot... yum

I still feel really sorry for Gerard, because of the way no-one realises how smart he is! :(
Maybe Frank will realise...

more soon!

xoxoxox

Oh. Wow. GREAT UPDATE! =D
Even when they're banging they make smart remarks at each other.
Brilliant.

Breanna.

That is certainly the best way to annoy Mikey!

That was a very hot chapter. I love how mean they still were to each other all through it sitll. I love how they have a very obvious sexual tension with all the bickiering.

Very well written too!

yum :D