Fun ways to get back at your brother - Comments

Great update :O

loool
it's very goood

update soon?

*new reader*

THIS IS AMAZING!

OMG. I LOVE IT. It's funny and hott and and and I need more. @_@

nice update

apart from the fact that you already KNEW you were going to kill me by the mere mention of hipbones, WHY SAM WHY. wasn't last night enough? i died last night. stopped breathing. managed to SOMEHOW come back to life. you killed me again with your evilness. (although i fucking LOVE you for it). i again, managed to continue living and now THIS. god. jesus fucking christ woman!

GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
now for my attempt at feedback.. which as we discussed is not my strong point. lol.
and its all positive too, cant find any negatives.
- even though i hate you for it, its good you divided it into two chapters and didnt put the entire sexyness in one chapter.
- its really good that it didnt just go into a normal frerard sex scene, youve managed to retain the humour and characteristics of the story.... and frank is still his teasing self, and gerard is still gerard. the characterisation is really good.
- written and structured fantastically.
- you just know i love it. so i shall stop there.

:)
update soon babe.
love you. xoxoxoox

wow...that was...quite interesting...XD haha! go gee! though...i'm getting the feeling that this isn't just gonna blow over as a "one night stand" kind of thing...and someone's gonna end up feeling used...but damn...if this isn't hot...kudos man. kudos. although...where you left off...that could use a little work...damn you cliffhangers...*wink wink* *nudge nudge* XD

anyways...shank koo for updating! it was mucho appreciated!

hehe cant for the next one!

yay! you FINALLY updated!! Took you long enough...lol! :P

Can't wait for the next chapter...

love you, update soon!!

xoxoxox

dude this story is sooooooooo good, please update soon!!!

-subscribes...

Great story

*Subscribes*

More when you can plz!!!

...one word.

DAYUMM!
:XD

More when you can.

Brilliant. You've got a universal sense of humor in this story, as well as great talent for absurdities. I'm looking forward to the coming chapters. =]

Breanna.

o o o o o o
emmarrr loves!
hahaha update soon babe !
this is awesome.
loves it.

dude! funny as hell...and i'm in-fucking-love with it!!!

you know...i think that gerard should like...plot some sort of revenge on his family (not just mikey...though i like where that's going... XD) with his intelligence...just to rub it in...*sigh* its too bad that his family is very...oblivious...but...maybe that's just gerard being good at hiding things? well, anyways, i'll just shut up now...

somones horny!

Im very please with your plan for revenge Gerard.. ;)

Sometime in the story, everyone (especially his family) should find out how smart Gerard is.
because i feel really sorry for him atm, and i don't like mikey in this story!

more soon? Love this story

xoxoxoxox

Oh man, this story had me rolling :lmfao
More when you can, please.

more soon!

Dude! This story is F*CKING HILARIOUS!

Love it! more soon?

lol chilli in milkshakes!