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  • mollycool

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    Stamkos is such a sweetheart in this story! Seriously, a saint for waiting it out. I hope he gets his :)
    October 26th, 2011 at 07:24am
  • pineapple55

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    oh i hope it doesn't get too awkward and sad before it gets happy! i saw the notification for this update this morning and saved it until all my classes were over...something to look foward to :). it was well worth the wait!
    October 26th, 2011 at 06:28am
  • x.Kris.x

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    Uh oh. This story is amazing as well, but I don't think you need me to tell you that. It's interesting to have you paint such a picture, because everyone always abhors cheating and what not, but you've done well in your portrays of the characters. We're all routing for them now lol! And Brendan isn't completely antagonistic, which is nice. That would have been a cop out I think. It's a very realistic story, which I always love about your writing. It may be fan fiction, but damn if it isn't believable! So grounded and detailed, it's so easy to just get lost in the little worlds you create.

    So is this the moment Steven's been waiting for? Or is Kara's conscious going to kick in? Hurry and update please!
    October 26th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • JTCC1950

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    I hope she is over Brendan!
    I cant wait for more!
    October 26th, 2011 at 04:21am
  • Cupcake1

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    I really hope she left to go break up with Brendan! Can't wait for more!
    October 26th, 2011 at 02:37am
  • no.one.is.home

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    Please tell me she just dumped him over the phone!!
    October 26th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • abyssopelagic;

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    yayayayayyayayayaayyyyy!!! so good(: i really hope Kara doesn't regret what happens though
    October 25th, 2011 at 11:45pm
  • Emiliana

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    OMG, way to leave us hanging! Please update ASAP!!
    October 25th, 2011 at 10:59pm
  • laredo.

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    oh my god.
    October 25th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    More chapters please? This story is fabulous! :)
    October 25th, 2011 at 06:48pm
  • hockey bliss

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    No update tonight so I reread this. Yep, still hate Brendan (even though he's completely unhateable) . Please please please may we see some Stamkos action soon? Pretty please?
    October 25th, 2011 at 07:23am
  • no.one.is.home

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    NO! DUMP HIM!
    October 25th, 2011 at 06:28am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    “Like Sportscenter ever talks about hockey.”

    Favorite line. Unfortunately, it's the truth.
    October 25th, 2011 at 03:56am
  • hockey bliss

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    Stop trying to make me like or feel sorry for Brendan. Not gonna happen. The guy could save puppies from burning buildings & I would still be Team Stamkos. So let's just make him back into a jealous douche & get the Kara-Steven sex train moving shall we? (PLEASE.)
    October 24th, 2011 at 09:18am
  • pineapple55

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    just when i thought she was thinking about breaking up with brendan he goes and acts nice!
    October 24th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • Cupcake1

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    It seems like Brendan doesn't even care anymore...hmmm he'd better not be cheating! Great update can't wait for more!
    October 24th, 2011 at 04:00am
  • Emiliana

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    I don't even know what to make of this chapter. Brendan seems...detached from the situation now. Kara appears to be realizing her feelings go deeper than friendship.
    October 24th, 2011 at 03:47am
  • Dallas.

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    Love. This. Story. That is all
    October 24th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • laredo.

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    Such a huge fan of this story, you have no idea.
    October 23rd, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • reneeanne

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    ugh omg. I just want her to dump this dude for Stamkos. Why is that so hard for her to do?
    October 23rd, 2011 at 09:56pm
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