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  • the epic blonde

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    God, I love this story. And I agree completely with hockey bliss up there.
    October 23rd, 2011 at 08:40pm
  • hockey bliss

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    If she doesn't call Brendan back, dump him, climb over the railing & ride Steven Stamkos like a Clydesdale my head may explode. Just thought you should know.
    October 23rd, 2011 at 10:58am
  • Cupcake1

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    Brendan needs to go...just saying. Can't wait for more!
    October 23rd, 2011 at 06:43am
  • no.one.is.home

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    I wish she's just dumped him then and there!
    October 22nd, 2011 at 07:59am
  • Emiliana

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    I feel like Kara's relationship with Brendan is finally unraveling & I approve.
    October 21st, 2011 at 11:41pm
  • reneeanne

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    I don't understand how she doesnt dive on him. She has amazing self control.
    October 21st, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • soupy

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    I am doing a happy dance right now!

    I do give Kara credit for telling Brendan the whole story - not sure I would be quite so honest, addressing the elephant in the room, knowing it was going to cause a fight.

    Unless she wanted to start a fight in the first place.......
    October 21st, 2011 at 10:19pm
  • Emiliana

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    He fit in so well with her family & he's completely head over heels in love with her. Kara needs to realize she's crazy about him too & dump Brendan.
    October 21st, 2011 at 09:11am
  • abyssopelagic;

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    the suspense is killing me!!! please update <3
    October 21st, 2011 at 05:28am
  • Cupcake1

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    Glad the family thing went well...can't wait for more!!!
    October 21st, 2011 at 04:58am
  • no.one.is.home

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    Thata boy, Stamkos. Next time, just full on kiss her!
    October 21st, 2011 at 03:49am
  • hockey bliss

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    Oh and to clarify the situation I was in sadly did not involve Steven Stamkos. If it had I would be a lot quicker about changing relationships than Kara!
    October 19th, 2011 at 08:51am
  • hockey bliss

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    The realism in the emotion you write always impresses me. I've been in Kara's situation and acted and felt exactly like she does. Brendan already has an "ex" in front of his name but no one will admit it.
    Love the condom locker room gag! LOL
    October 19th, 2011 at 08:48am
  • Cupcake1

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    Lol at the condoms...can't wait for more!
    October 19th, 2011 at 05:37am
  • Emiliana

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    I want them to get together so badly, but I don't want her to cheat on Brendan. UGH.
    October 19th, 2011 at 04:08am
  • adean1215

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    Obsessed with this story :) I always look forward to your new stories! I really want to see what happens with Kara and stammer. Part of me thinks they will eventually get together, but part of me knows that you are full of surprises! Guess I'll just have to wait for more updates :)
    October 19th, 2011 at 01:36am
  • no.one.is.home

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    They are so cute together! They should just freaking get together! It's annoying when two people so perfect for each other can't see it!
    October 19th, 2011 at 12:57am
  • MissLis

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    please don't make her cheat
    let brendan do something really stupid or whatever and let them be broken up and steven pick up the pieces
    but please don't destroy them by cheating, that would kill me :S

    excited to see where this is going!
    October 18th, 2011 at 10:46pm
  • abyssopelagic;

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    I really need them to kiss. That'd be amazing. Please update!
    October 18th, 2011 at 10:45pm
  • no.one.is.home

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    My God! Just dump him and get with Stammer!
    October 18th, 2011 at 08:41am