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  • Cupcake1

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    Can't wait to read about their Thanksgiving!
    October 18th, 2011 at 05:48am
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    ugh yes i love this story.
    October 18th, 2011 at 05:18am
  • weasleychick09

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    :| , I want to be happy that Steven is going with Kara but then I am worried like Marty is for him. Kara has feelings for him but she just pushes them away by saying they are just friends! Ugh it is so frustrating and Steven knows what is going on but he is digging himself an even bigger hole! Blah they are both irritating!
    That is good though. Stories are always the best when you can make the reader feel some real emotions!
    Anyway I am rambling like a crazy person!
    Can't wait for more!
    Amanda
    October 18th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • abyssopelagic;

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    so fucking good. please update!
    October 18th, 2011 at 02:30am
  • Emiliana

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    He's so completely head over heels in love with her. Brendan needs to take a hike ASAP.
    October 17th, 2011 at 10:59pm
  • welcometotheshow

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    poor Steven!!!!! I kinda wanted to cry. update soon.
    October 16th, 2011 at 10:49pm
  • Emiliana

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    I agree with everyone else's sentiments, poor Stammer. As someone else said, I think the shit's going to hit the fan soon too. Can't wait for the next update!
    October 16th, 2011 at 08:00pm
  • no.one.is.home

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    Oh my God!!! Poor Steven!!!
    October 16th, 2011 at 09:25am
  • Emily Lane

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    Awwww, poor Steven! He had to hear them do it... fuck, I bet Brendan did it on purpose!
    Wish these were longer updates!
    October 16th, 2011 at 09:21am
  • cassy2112

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    Just finished Texas was you and started reading this one. LOVE THEM!
    October 16th, 2011 at 08:15am
  • hockey bliss

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    The angst is so thick I can cut it with a skate blade. Poor Steven. Can Brendan be a serial killer so Kara will hate him & we can get rid of him asap?
    October 16th, 2011 at 07:43am
  • laredo.

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    I love this story too much.
    October 16th, 2011 at 07:22am
  • weasleychick09

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    :( Poor Steven I want to just give him a hug!
    It is really a great story though! Probably one of my favorites!
    Can't wait for more!
    October 16th, 2011 at 06:57am
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    This is probably one of the best stories I've read lately, so thank you for entertaining me while I'm bored at school.
    And I'm feeling like shit's gonna hit the fan soon with Steven and Brendan - cant wait :)
    October 16th, 2011 at 06:33am
  • Cupcake1

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    Poor Steven, Brendan needs to go...can't wait for more!
    October 16th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • seventyone

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    obsessed. poor stammer.
    October 16th, 2011 at 05:19am
  • abyssopelagic;

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    oh my god. that was horrible!!!!! ): poor steven!
    that chapter though, was FABULOUS. Please update soon!
    October 16th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • hockey bliss

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    Dear God this is heaven. More please!
    October 14th, 2011 at 07:34am
  • no.one.is.home

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    Still not a Stamkos fan but he's sweet in this story.
    October 14th, 2011 at 05:52am
  • Emiliana

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    I have to say, I blame you for making me find Stamkos attractive, but I am totally ok with this. ;-)
    October 14th, 2011 at 01:21am
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