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  • lovelyhope

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    This chapter was so cute. Ketley's really bonding with all the guys. Now she just needs to open her eyes and realize that Josh is right in front of her.
    November 15th, 2011 at 05:16am
  • Earl Of Slander

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    Ketley learning how to drive + her first time getting wasted = The greatest chapter by far.
    This entire thing was so great. I love the dialogue, it is just so real and the interactions between all the characters is so believable. You have skill with that, my friend. I don't know if I'm over analyzing here, but I think there might also be something between Max and Ketley, but I'm totally spit balling. He's probably just being really friendly, but I can see one of the other boys finding her intriguing like Josh does because she's so different. I'm already praying for another update.
    November 15th, 2011 at 04:36am
  • sukisumi4ever

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    Ketley is so sweet and innocent. and josh ust loves her so much. its adorable.
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:57am
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    I love their relationship. I can't wait till Ketley realizes he likes her.
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:46am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    God I wish that happened the first time I got drunk. That was def the cutest thing. I want that to ketley don't worry you aren't the only one :) Update soon.
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:46am
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    what happens when ketley has to go back to LA though :c
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:35am
  • kristenmarjorie

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    I finally got around to start reading this and (as expected) it's awesome. <3
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:15am
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    Aww, that little dance scene was so cute! I love all of them, and can't wait for more:)
    November 14th, 2011 at 01:06am
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    I'm really liking Ketley and Josh. Sure, Ketley's a bit stuck up-like, but I feel like it's because she's sheltered. I kind of hope she doesn't change TOO much.
    November 13th, 2011 at 11:29pm
  • lovelyhope

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    This chapter was so cute. I feel as if Ketley is slowly opening up....very slowly of course.
    November 13th, 2011 at 03:49am
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    Aw I loved this chapter so much! What Josh did for Ketley was really sweet. :) It's good to see she's starting to loosen up a bit.
    November 12th, 2011 at 03:50pm
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    Yet another great chapter. I like how ketley is slowly growing more confidence and changing ever so slightly. I can't wait to see where this story goes :) Update soon.
    November 12th, 2011 at 01:23pm
  • Earl Of Slander

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    This new chapter just feels so monumental.
    Ketley is finally coming out of her shell at the end, and it just opens up all these doors to what can happen, all thanks to Josh. He likes her so much and I'm afraid he's going to get his heart broken somehow, most likely due to some action by her parents like forbidding her from seeing him or something. She is a piece of clay that is easy to shape because she is submissive, and she can either be molded by Josh or by the routines she's lived with her entire life. I just don't know what is going to happen next and I love that. The sign of a great writer is their ability to keep their readers on their toes, and you are certainly doing a great job at that.

    Things are going too smoothly right now and I have a feeling that it's about to get rocky.
    Update soon because I must know what comes next!!!
    November 12th, 2011 at 10:31am
  • hachie

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    I.love.this.chapter.
    Like how Ketley thought of how she prefer Josh over any of the guys since he has more body mass!
    I mean who wouldn't want Josh because he is freaking hot!!!!
    Especially when he smiles that smirk!
    I completely gushed when Josh was holding Ketley close to his body!!!!! X3
    And how he got slightly jealous when Max was holding her instead of him but that changed when Olivia told Josh to hold Ketley instead.
    Josh is a complete and utter sweetheart!
    He let Ketley have time to practice her ballet and she doesn't have to lie to her.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 12th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • erika_xtc

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    I think it's good I guess that she doesn't like being called perfect. She rebels against it and she'll come out of her shell because of it. I'm glad she met the YMAS guys, they'll do her a world of good :)
    November 11th, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • kassadilla

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    You're greaat.
    November 11th, 2011 at 10:46pm
  • lovelyhope

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    I love how Josh is trying to stop Ketley from being so perfect. He definitely has a tough battle ahead of him lol.
    November 10th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • unsuspecting victim;

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    This story is amazing :3
    November 7th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • fallenstar

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    So I'm not too sure what i think of the story. I mean its written great, and i love Josh, dont get me wrong. But something about Ketley annoys me haha. I guess she's so different from every other character you've had, and totally different from me in general. so i cant really relate. But i am excited where and how you're gonna take this story :)

    good work:)
    November 7th, 2011 at 08:06pm
  • sukisumi4ever

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    awwwww josh is getting through to her. but i think ketley is going to ge tin biiiiiig trouble. i wonder if she'll tell her parents where shes going....
    November 7th, 2011 at 04:04pm
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