Uneasy Hearts Weigh the Most. - Comments

Yeah he is breaking her. I love the idea behind this story. It is going to be one of those stories that you just can't help but love.

I LOVE this story already. Ketley is so cute, and I am looking forward to more:)

This story is such a pleasure to read. Did I already mention that it is very different from any other stories I've read? I mean, I've seen the whole "trying to get the uptight girl out of her shell" technique done before, but you just accomplish it and present it so well. And I hope you don't take that wrong like I'm saying that this story is typical to others in that category; you said yourself that the reader shouldn't expect that, which means there must be some plot twist that you are just itching to let us all in one and it's going to be one hell of a day when I find out what it is.

Ketley is just so...sheltered. And it is clear that you, as the author, get really immersed in that perspective and never break away from the character. It's really brilliant and I envy that skill you have. I feel like I'm in that coffee shop with them, watching her sip her tea politely one minute and slurping it the next, or watching as she carefully places the cloth napkin in her lap.

This is just great. So so great.

I sensing that Ketley will get into a lot of trouble with her parents.
She is going on an unplanned trip with her best friend and a group of guys she barely met.
Josh is very intrigue with her, how she carried herself compare to the girl he knows.
I think it was adorable when Josh was telling her to do things that she was taught to be wrong and disgusting.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think Josh is going to fall first because Ketley is so guarded but on the other hand she really liked when he called her odd so she could be the one to fall first.

I think Josh is going to fall first :) He already seems like he is.

I put my bet on Josh being the first one to fall in love with Ketley!
Because she isn't like the girls that Josh probably goes after.
She is very quiet and polite too.
And he knows that she doesn't like the word perfect!
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I want Josh to fall first *nods* Somehow though, I think Ketley will fall before him.

In love with this already love! Such a cute story.
Ketley seems to be a really complicated girl and I'd love to start reading more into her! And Josh is being a sweetheart again, you've really gotta love him!
I really can't wait to see where this is going :) <3

i think josh is gonna fall first, and ketley's just gonna be like "wait what" and josh is gonna be like "you're so STUPID" (like in titanic) and then they'll kiss and it'll be perfect
idk but yeah i think josh will fall first (:

i love these two. so cute. i definately think josh is going to fall first. ketleys too insecure to beleive josh would falll for her, so she wont fall for him until he proves to her he wants to be with her. still, soooo cute, cant wait to find out what happens :)

Cute little chapter there. I am really liking this story :) Update soon.

Oh boy, this one is really starting to become my favorite.
I love love LOVE the way you portray Ketley. Is it a coincidence that you gave her an odd name and Josh happens to call her odd? I don't know, that's just a thought of mine. Their interaction is fantastic. It's not in the reader's face all the time, and if it is in their face, it is done with subtlety. I have not seen a story done where the main man is completely intrigued by the shy and polite girl. The outcast, yes. But not with a girl characterized like this. What a great job you're doing.

I can't wait to see how her parents get involved in all of this, but I'm sure it's not too long of a wait from now. It's about time we get some conflict in here and see how the posh and composed Ketley can handle it!

Also, you watch Dexter and The Walking Dead?
I think I love you.

I loved it! I'm looking forward to reading more:)

aww so cute :D can't wait for the next chapter!

"Socially retarded Ketley." Oh my god, I LOVE HER! Hahaha. She's adorable! And I love Olivia also, being the complete opposite of her. They're the cutest friends. I love it! And I definitely love this story already! I cannot wait for more!
Update again soon please!
ONE WEEK UNTIL WE SEE THESE BOYS IN PERSON. I CANNOT WAIT. <3

I'm excited to see where this story goes because I'm sure there will be some twists and turns to it.

AW!!! She was nervous and got lost in Josh's eyes :D Can't wait for more interaction there!

love dis

Aw she met the boys and she was completely nervous as heck!
I bet the guys noticed how well mannered, polite and quiet she was.
They probably thought she was a snob with the way she was actually but she was just shy and nervous.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!