Picking Up the Pieces - Comments

I love Matt in this story! This story is one of my very favorites!!! lol it would have been hilarious if she had punched one of the skanks! :) I can't wait for another chapter! :D

Wow. I love Matt in this story! I guess I like the asshole attitude but...wow. Just wow. Lol I also like how Kari is slowly being able to say more of whats on her mind and even though it pisses him off, Matt's starting to just let her do it since he loves her :) I soooo would have loved a cat fight between Kari and one of the skanks!! Just sayin...lol Update sooon!

Matt in this chapter was so fucking sexy, Whitney, he really was. I think that the Matt you've created in this story might just be my favorite out of all the Matt stories of yours that I've read. I think he's just amazing and cute and it's just really....amazing to me how you can manage to make such a bad ass seem so soft and romantic at the same time. I can't wait to see what happens later on with Kari and how the festival goes, because I'm sure its going to be absolutely amazing. :D

I love this!

I was expecting Matt to hit her when she said that. And now he's accusing her of being jealous of his whores. He just doesn't understand that she doesn't want that life. But I loved that she told those sluts off. Loved the update. Can't wait for more.

I love that Kari held her own against the whores.
Matt should learn how to take it easy with her though :/ although he kind of did when she mouthed off and didn't hit her
<3 Michele

Yup she is not jealous of those whores.
They are actually the ones that are jealous of her since she is married to Matt.
Kari does like it when Matt doesn't go to her especially when he is very rough with, leaving bruises on her body.
Well at least Matt held back when Kari made that comment about people might think that he is abusing her and they would call the police.
But that doesn't excuse how he has treated her since she got there especially on their so called wedding night.
A night of horror for Kari and how she is stuck in this life style for the rest of her life.
Matt doesn't know the horror she went through and how much he has damages her physically and emotionally which will be with the rest of her life.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He doesn't like how she flinches away from him.
It's going to take a lot more than hot, monkey sex
to make up for her damaged past, though
it would be enough for me

Amazing update :D

Matt needs to get rid of all his whores! <3

Matt needs to work on his anger issues lol

Love it ! keep it up<3

There are moments when Matt could be so sweet and loving
And I wish he just would be loving
But the fact that he has the urge to say, I love you, is start
<3 Michele

That was dirty and sweet. Love it x

Matt has really twisted way showing his affection and kindness to Kari.
I mean he said that they never say 'I love you' at all during their marriage but Matt does want to say but he knows that kari doesn't love him.
So Tuck hasn't let up about buying Kari back since Matt was annoyed about it and he isn't going to let Kari go.
Matt can be sweet but he is still an asshole.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

can't wait for more

Wow Matt is one sex machine there..he just kept going and going lol

Great update :D

Matt loves her in his own sick way. Now that she's on his mind more he's going to have her around more. Maybe when she sees his softer, loving side she'll come around to love him. He already does, but to get her love he's gonna have to work hard. The smut scene was amazing! I read it twice! haha

That's gonna be sore in the morning!
I loved this chapter!!!
Matt... ♥

Sounds like Matt is a sex machine...she's gonna be sore tomorrow