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  • Its_RobynXo

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    So good! I loved it! <3
    November 6th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • Sugarplum_19

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    Omg update soon it's so amazing can't wait!!!!
    November 5th, 2011 at 10:04pm
  • xmissxhanerx

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    keep it up darling! I love it!
    November 4th, 2011 at 02:47am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Hmm . . . Matt's behavior was very suspicious tonight . . .
    Is he trying to focus on her and actually be a husband, a good husband?
    <3 Michele
    November 3rd, 2011 at 01:49pm
  • a venom

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    loved it
    November 3rd, 2011 at 07:09am
  • SMshadows

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    I can't figure out which one of ur stories is my favorite but IF I had to choose, I'd choose this one :) I absolutely love it!I wonder how long its gonna be before Kari falls for Matt! And Tuck?! I know he's bound to start some drama somewhere! Ahhhh can't wait!
    November 3rd, 2011 at 05:28am
  • hachie

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    Matt seems to be paying more attention to Kari much to her dismay.
    And he didn't got to any of his whores, instead he went to her again and she wants to make it go by faster.
    Those girls become to dependent on their masters that they don't want to get the guts to make something of theirselves.
    I feel bad that Kari is going to suffer another night with Matt even though he makes her feel the pleasure.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 3rd, 2011 at 05:27am
  • Lola the Kid

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    Gah! I'm so excited for the next chapter!!! This is such an amazing story!!!
    November 3rd, 2011 at 05:27am
  • for i have syn

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    I know people hate the one (or two) word response but, seriously, the only word to describe this story is FUCKING AWESOME. Wow. It's controlling, possessive, dangerous, and kinky. :) Love this. Can't wait for the next update. (Funny, I was actually gonna say one word and yet I'm leaving you a paragraph.) Haha, fail on my part. Again, I really like this. Getting chills down my spine just reading this.
    November 3rd, 2011 at 04:49am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Wow Matt paying more attention to Kari now. I wonder what he's planning??
    He has her confused right now.
    great update :D
    November 3rd, 2011 at 03:58am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Can't wait for more! <3
    November 3rd, 2011 at 03:55am
  • CharmedLuna

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    Since he's starting to pay more attention
    to Kari that means there's going to be more
    sexy time! haha. I feel bad that she went through
    so much though :(
    I hope things get better soon for her. She deserves
    a nice break :D
    LOVED the update!
    November 3rd, 2011 at 03:52am
  • Synful Shadows

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    What's gotten into Matt? He didn't buy a girl, and he's focused completely on Kari. Surely he's up to something. Loved the update.
    November 3rd, 2011 at 03:26am
  • shortygirl

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    poor kari...im surprised matt didn't buy a girl
    November 3rd, 2011 at 03:10am
  • xmissxhanerx

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    poor kari :(
    love the story so far!
    November 2nd, 2011 at 04:17am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Great update :D
    November 1st, 2011 at 08:25pm
  • pjrox

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    I loved the last thing she said. xx
    November 1st, 2011 at 03:39pm
  • a venom

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    can't wait for more
    November 1st, 2011 at 06:44am
  • Lola the Kid

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    Poor Kari!! I love this story so much!!! It's totally original and I love that so much! :D Can't wait for more!!!
    November 1st, 2011 at 06:23am
  • shortygirl

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    I like this so far
    November 1st, 2011 at 05:07am
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