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  • Bara-Baby

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    So good already! (: <3
    October 25th, 2011 at 06:16am
  • candice

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    LOVED IT!
    October 25th, 2011 at 06:10am
  • Lola the Kid

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    I love it already!!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDD I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Loved the first chapter! <3
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:23am
  • hachie

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    So Kari is a fail safe for Matt.
    He doesn't have to go look for someone when gets out of that life style.
    He already has someone there for him even though Kari is disgusted by him.
    Woah Tuck bought Kari from her father when she was just sixteen?????????
    And then Tuck got tired of her so he sold her to Shadows who had a different plan for her.
    I wonder if Shadows has develop feelings for her at all because he didn't answer why she should be more committed when he isn't in their so call marriage.
    Though he rapes her when she doesn't comply to his wishes.
    And she right about what she thought about the girls, they are blinded by the pleasure that Shadows gives them and they don't see the flaws of him.
    Now she is going to see Tuck again, that does not bode well.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:11am
  • BriBriSexyTime

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    the punishment was the best part. can't wait to see what happens when Tuck sees Kari.
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • reeseynicole21

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    Yeah, I love it. Please update soon.
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I love the first chapter :D
    I wonder how it goes when Kari sees Tuck again??
    Can't wait for the next one
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • CharmedLuna

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    AHHHH! It has begun! I love the punishment. I wonder how it's going to go when Tuck sees Kari. Will there be drama?
    October 25th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • Jorel Decker.

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    I'd be pissed if Matt spanked me as punishment. Just saying.

    Update soon! I've been waiting for this. (:
    October 25th, 2011 at 04:50am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Love this so much! It sucks that Matt married her but keeps sleeping with other women. If he see himself with her for the rest of his life, then why sleep around? I love it though and can't wait for an update! :D
    October 25th, 2011 at 04:48am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    What a dick!
    I wish she would just be able to leave him . . .
    <3 Michele
    October 25th, 2011 at 04:46am
  • Star Angel

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    Sounds so good
    October 23rd, 2011 at 07:35am
  • nikiniks

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    CANT WAIT!!
    October 23rd, 2011 at 07:11am
  • BriBriSexyTime

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    I'm so excited and I just can't hide it!
    October 23rd, 2011 at 05:44am
  • hachie

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    I am already loving this already!
    Another story with Matt in a AU!
    I can't wait for the first chapter to be out!
    I am so excited for the update!
    October 23rd, 2011 at 04:24am
  • CharmedLuna

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    This is just too awesome, Whitney. I'm so damn stoked, pyshced and excited for it to begin. I know it's going to blow my mind! I look so forward for this to begin. I love the idea for this. It's so unique and I can't wait to read what you have instored for me tehe
    October 22nd, 2011 at 04:30am
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