zacky & lilly sittin' in a tree- K I S S I N G hahahahah ;P aawe sneaky zacky!! but now cali and matt got each others numbers!! wiiiee.. awe but poor brian doesn't...?? :D
Just one quick comment: Chapter 19. The mum is 32 years old. The daughter is 18. I don't think the mom was pregnant at 13 and had her at 14. You might want to make the mom like 35-38 instead.