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  • Angelina Shadows

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    Aww Matt helped to make her feel better. Matt is so sweet. I love him! You are a very good writer and I love your writing. Well off to read now.
    April 5th, 2012 at 02:00am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    I loved this chapter! Cali totally beat Bailey's ass. She totally deserved it for being a bitch. Aww poor Cali. Matt just had to make her read. It must suck having dslexia. I wonder how Matt will react when he finds out. Damn she fell to that must have hurt. I hope that Matt can make everything better. I love the layout and banner btw. I am going back to read now.
    April 5th, 2012 at 01:50am
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    It was very nice of Matt to drive her home. They bonded really well and they have something in common which is very good. Damn Cali already likes him but who can blame her. Matt is a fucking sexy god I mean seriously. I can't wait to see what happens next so I'm going to go read and find out. Oh and definitely subscribed.
    April 5th, 2012 at 01:40am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    Alright read chapter two. Haha Cali made me laugh with her first intro lmao that must have been amusing for Matt lmao. I can see the chemistry forming between them already. I love this a lot already. You are a really good writer and I like your ideas. I am going to go read more so I can see what happens next. Love this <3 and I love Matt <3
    April 5th, 2012 at 01:31am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    Well I just read the first chapter and I have to say I like this a lot. It immediately caught my interest and plus it features Matt and I fucking love him so now I'm really interested. Mmm Matt as a teacher. Cali is a bad girl haha. I am going to read more now.
    April 5th, 2012 at 01:24am
  • MoMo_92

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    I love this story it's really good.......Matt and Cali r cute together even tho it's illegal......I wonder what Brian is goin to do to be Cali's favorite band member.....subscribing now can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    April 5th, 2012 at 01:21am
  • EzioAuditore

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    omg this chapter was pure awesomeness.
    I love when Mattie and Cali get close... :O tehehhee
    Brian, you meanie!
    April 5th, 2012 at 12:17am
  • helena_88

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    hahah lilly needs to breathe now and then so cali can answer her questions.. :D
    ooowh BRIAN!!! ruining a perfect moment.. hahah.. hmm wonder if he was annoyed at Zacky.. OR if he saw them kissing and got jealous?? :D hoping for the later.. heheheh :D
    April 4th, 2012 at 11:17pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
    March 29th, 2012 at 07:50pm
  • helena_88

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    hahahah oh brian.. he's just so frickin adorable!! just wanna pinch his cheeks and ruffle his hair or something.. and matt.. he's just like a kid too :D her mom seems awesome :)
    March 28th, 2012 at 04:03pm
  • RazzyVengeance6661

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    lol this was a cute chapter. Brian was fricken hilarious!
    March 28th, 2012 at 01:27pm
  • EzioAuditore

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    I didn't like that Mom/Matt part <.< tehehehe

    And are you trying to kill me with all the cuteness? BRIAN. Be mine, omg... I can't even choose between him and Matt anymore, gimme both, Cali doesn't need 'em.
    March 28th, 2012 at 11:16am
  • LostInStereo920

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    Brian is such a little kid it's ridiculous, but cute.
    March 28th, 2012 at 12:26am
  • shortygirl

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    Poohbear...man thats gotta be embarrasing...
    March 27th, 2012 at 11:06pm
  • defenestration;;

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    I am absolutely in love with this story. :)
    You're an amazing writer! You can take me from laughing to crying to laughing again in one chapter, you gotta update soon. <3
    March 27th, 2012 at 07:01am
  • choirgirlx3

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    Pure amazingness!!!!
    March 20th, 2012 at 11:11pm
  • EzioAuditore

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    Can I please have more? *puppy eyes*
    God, I am so in love with this story... AND BRIAN. <3 <3 N'aww, he's so fucking adorable, I love it. and I still feel like there's something coming up..
    DONT TORTURE US FOR TOO LONG. I know where your Tumblr lives. <.<
    March 19th, 2012 at 02:54pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    Pure amazingness!!!!!
    March 18th, 2012 at 09:34pm
  • helena_88

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    oh my dear god!! i could totally picture brian on the floor laughing!! and matt... aawe! poor thing! i'd love to see him in those pants though... *smirks*
    and eeeh.. what's up with brian? has he got the hots for her or something?? now this could really get interesting!! :P
    March 18th, 2012 at 09:26pm
  • shortygirl

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    Well that went differently then i thought it would. Brian is such a little kid i swaer
    March 18th, 2012 at 09:20pm