The One - Comments

This story is awesomeness : )

cali is so damn lucky, uh, not the beaten part but the brian and matt part ;) hehehe! those two men are just out of this world drop dead gorgeous and awesome <3 matt being so worried, it's adorable :D

Im surprised Matt even bothered knocking at the door. He could break it down with his muscles XD

Well who would have guessed that. brian is actually just a nice guy. xD OR MAYBE THERE WILL BE SOMETHING BETWEEN THEM LATER ON. But I still ship Cali and Matty, he is so caring and ajsdhkasd, I dunno, it's so cute.. xD It was kinda of like father and mother watching over their kid, Matt being the mother and bri the father xDD I never said that <.<

Well if Matt finds out he should be happy his friend was there in time to save her.

"Brian keeps making his appearances, doesn't he? Maybe he'll make a few more...;)"
WOT. YES!! :3
I totally agree with Synus Sneezus... :') I'm getting that feeling as well.
Awh Matt's a cutie :3

I'm soooo happy Brian saved her

BRIAN! ASDGJDHJLKDSDSDASDAS.

Why do I have the weird feeling something is, at some point, going to happen between them two? <.< I totally ship Matt and Cali so I don't know how to feel about that thought, but I guess I'll let you surprise me.
SO AWESOME. Please update soon! :3

update soon love this

Ive been away for a little bit and I finally got caught up! Aw Brian saved her that is so cute! update soon!

Aww i like this story a lot, hope u would update again soon :)

seriously!! close to tears at the end there AND goosebumps everywhere!! Holy SHIT!! Brian.. my hero!! <3 looooooooove him!! :D :D :D :D :D thank god for him :P

oh and yeah, matt was a real cutie too ;)

I absolutely love this story. I have been reading for a while now and I must forgotten to subscribe before because the last chapter I remembered was like 13, so I found it again! Yay! Anyways, keep up the excellent work.

ahh! Brian is like a superman! :D ;D
Amazing update, Im eager to see what Matt's gonna say about it all
update soon :)

hahah i just frickin LOVED that chapter!! her reaction to Brian's little Pinkly and Matt being jealous and just super adorable AND the funny ends with the bitch walking in... O_o oh-shit!! :D

LOVING EVERY MOMENT OF IT. Just post more soon please

love it can't wait for the next update

GUH Bailey such a bi-at-ch!! :) oh and when she described Brian *sighs*
heheheh awe yeah they're going on a daaaaaate.. *chuckles* they're so cute :)

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You tease. Give me more. xD
I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm so damn curious about what will happen with them two.
Please update soon! ._.

She has a big anger problem...sounds like me...
Its wrong that they kissed but there meeting up atn pizza hut?