I really love this! I was drawn into the story from the very beginning. :D You've got some skill. ~ Keep it up! I can't wait to see how the story progresses. i like how the point of view changes with each chapter and the interaction between the character's is intriging. I love the names for some reason too. :'3 I love the adorable factor as well as the drama, haha. ^-^ Slash is one of my favorite things to write and its even better to read! Ahh I can't wait for each update!
I love how you started this, with the letter the older brother is writing. It's very sweet, how he trues to remain masculine while doing this very mushy and adorable act. It was a very engaging beginning, and I think it has a lot of potential. I wish you the best of luck with it!
Ha, they're not about to give up, YAY! :D I seriously love Zeke, dude xD And I really hope Evan is right and he's warming up to Sam. They're so freaking cute! ^-^ Update soon, please! This is amazing *-*
Come on, Zeke!! Give the poor boy a chance @_@ Haha, Zeke is so freaking amazing :D He's so funnily sarcastic. I don't know if I want him to stop being like that to give Sam a chance, though. 'cause this is just too funny!! x'D I absolutely LOVE this :D More, please *-*
Awesome. Awesome awesome awesome story. Freaking love it and have no clue as to why I haven't commented before :D My favourite character would have to be Evan, though. He's adorable ^^
If I'm going to be honest here... I freaking LOVE Zeke :'3 He's just so... him! Gahh, can't describe *-* But I love Sam too. I was reading this chapter and thinking of how much I loved this boy. He's just so laid back, you know? Kinda like he's owner of his own world and I think that's brilliant (': This is really amazing! Update soon :D