This thing that went down was shit :( But I want to comment again, 'cause I seriously think you deserve every comment *^-^* So yeah... I love this and I want an update really really soon! :3
Sorry to point this out but it's a pet peeve of mine, in chapter 4 Challenge excepted.” It should be *Challenge accepted* but other then that little thing, I really love the chapter and this looks like it will be an amazing story :)
But I want to comment again, 'cause I seriously think you deserve every comment *^-^*
So yeah... I love this and I want an update really really soon! :3