The Past Ain't Through With You - Comments

  • mcrmom

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    No they are not...I think she's fed up with him and is cheating. Damn!
    November 29th, 2011 at 05:55pm
  • Blue to help me fall

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    things aren't looking good for Gee
    November 28th, 2011 at 03:36am
  • Blue to help me fall

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    Hi Carmen, I just found your story today and I am really enjoying it. I love how you include everyday events and dialogue. Really makes you feel you are reading a snapshot of actual people's lives, not just a simple character. The flashbacks are really interesting, can't wait to see what happens next!
    November 27th, 2011 at 10:58am
  • mcrmom

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    Gerard's really a mess, isn't he? And obviously Holly's got some issues.
    November 23rd, 2011 at 06:01pm
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    Sorry I didn't comment on the previous chapter. I'm really getting wrapped up in this story, though. I feel so bad for both Holly and G.
    November 21st, 2011 at 03:49pm
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    Love the backstory. Poor Holly, poor Sonja.
    November 17th, 2011 at 03:45pm
  • mcrmom

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    Terrific. G really needs to get his shit together, though. And Holly, hosing off the girls outside...priceless!
    November 14th, 2011 at 03:27pm
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    Aw wow, this is great!
    November 12th, 2011 at 04:35pm
  • Venganza!

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    This is really good! Loved the dialogue in this story and I cannot wait to find out more about the relationship between Gee and Holly.
    November 11th, 2011 at 12:02am
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    Awesome. Loved the flashback.
    November 10th, 2011 at 06:41pm
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    I love how this is developing. Sounds like some bad shit happened...
    November 7th, 2011 at 03:32pm
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    This is a very good story. I like the dialogue, and especially the interplay between Gerard and Holly while they're sitting outside at night. She really does tell him off, doesn't she?
    November 4th, 2011 at 03:20pm