Hi Carmen, I just found your story today and I am really enjoying it. I love how you include everyday events and dialogue. Really makes you feel you are reading a snapshot of actual people's lives, not just a simple character. The flashbacks are really interesting, can't wait to see what happens next!
This is a very good story. I like the dialogue, and especially the interplay between Gerard and Holly while they're sitting outside at night. She really does tell him off, doesn't she?