@ hotdogpriss Thanks so much for the comment. I have already started another story, it is called The Way Home and is on (I guess you call it a sub-site) My Chemical Romance. I put it there hoping to get more readers.
Awwww I knew it'd be ok, so wonderful how you pull all those little "Nick" things in, so clever. But what else is there? (ps though I don't want this to end, I'm so looking forward to the next story you write, I'm sure it'll be great as well)