The Consequences of Being a Bitch - Comments

I'm interested in Jubilee's back story, as to why she dislikes women so much.

The summary is amazing. It really pulled me in.
The first chapter was also amazing - truly, more than amazing really. Jubilee seems like quite the character. She's kind of that cliche right now, you know? Just a bitch and whatnot. But knowing a bit about your other stories, I know she's going to really develop. I really like her personality, though - take no excuses, very candid. I like that she acknowledges the fact that since every girl is a bitch, so is she. That's definitely different then most girls, aha. I got a bit confused with the last paragraph about how it's not their fault half the time but then it is their fault... something like that? My confusion probably has to do with my drugged-up, sick self, so don't worry.
This is really good, and I wish you the best of luck with it as your Nano. :)

DAMN, we may all be bitches but she's a bitter, whiny bitch. :') I REALLY LIKE THIS MARIANNA! It's really great, even though she makes me want to claw my own eyes out already. I think that she's a mega bitch who is bitter that she's the megatron of bitches so she calls everyone a bitch to feel better about her bitchass self. In the words of Diddy, I NEED NO BITCHASSNESS.

Yeah, Alexx is subscribed. <3

*sarcasm. Sorry, I can't spell. :P

lol. I like this, I truly do. Is this exposing a hidden side of you, maybe? ;P Aha, because this emotion has to be coming from somewhere. XD I kid, I kid. But seriously, you're a great sarcarsm-writer. :)
Great first update! Couldn't not agree with all that Jubilee said, it's kinda true. XD
Can't wait for more! :D

The layout is good, I enjoy it. Doesn't distract from the story, and you don't see colors like that used all too often.

Your character is so far pretty one dimensional, but it is a good dimension and a good place to start. It's good to start a character like this off the way you have; such an opinionated person. It's good to introduce her this way and build on this from now on. I saw no mistakes; you did a very good job, and I'll be back to read more!

I've been in love with this, and you just made me ASDFHKLALSDKCFHALSKDF.
I swear.
-ovaries explode.
AND THERE ISN'T EVEN A GUY IN THIS CHAPTER.
so if their ever is, and I don't comment, don't worry about it. my life's just gonna be gone, no worries! c:
update soon?(:

Aha I liked this a lot! I loved in the summary the last line was "There's more to Jubilee than she's letting on." (or something like that) because it's all mysterious and really draws the reader in. I also like how Jubilee isn't excluding herself from her generalization of all girls being bitches, because that pisses me off to no end when a jock's like "All jocks are assholes, but I'm different" 'cause you just admitted to being an asshole. But I digress. I'm really excited to read this and see where it goes, and I'm definitely subscribing! :D

This is hilarious. When I read the summary I thought, "oh, another narrative about a girl." But then I read the first chapter and it is amazing. For cereal.
First of all, the layout is amazing. I especially like the banner picture. It seems like it really fits the story so far.
I like that this is your NaNo story, because I can be sure to expect more (I'm deff subscribing)
I did not see any grammar and or spelling errors, so good job.
Sorry I can't give you more criticism, I did not really see any problems with this.

I can't even explain how goo an author you are.
you make me wanna beg you to update a story just judging by your summary, BOO YOU!);

Ooohhh... yay! Another new story! :D You should've known I was going to comment. ;)
I really like the layout for it. And I really like the name you have picked out for the main character: Jubilee. :) It's very unique. :) The plot sounds like it's going to be interesting too. :)
Can't wait for this to start! Very excited!
Definitely... subscribed! :D