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  • OurDeal

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    Oh lol.....poor Brian.....
    December 23rd, 2011 at 02:43pm
  • Haylie Jaed

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    I got the email this time, but thanks for the comment telling me you'd updated!

    So Shadow's getting stronger, huh? This can't be a good thing. =| I'm glad that he's sorta bonding with Zacky there, though. I honestly thought he was going to kill himself in that tub - it was terrifying! But at the same time, I can understand why he did it, especially if similar things have helped him in the past.

    That little monologue from Forest at the end was so perfect I cried. I've never really thought about their situation in that way, and it really opened my eyes a whole lot more. Bravo!

    Can't wait to see what happens next!

    xoxo
    HJ.
    December 7th, 2011 at 09:37am
  • OurDeal

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    Yay.....Finally....I hope he tells though....
    December 6th, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • Austin Carlile;

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    Loove this sotry. :D <3
    Bwaha, I has cookies, and I`m willing to trade my (delicious) chocolate chip cookies for Jimmy!
    *passes plate of cookies* :3
    November 27th, 2011 at 06:53am
  • OurDeal

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    Well than....the truth comes out....but Forest needs to tell Zacky ASAP....
    November 26th, 2011 at 03:17am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Here's your cookies - where's my Rev? ;)

    I'm really glad that Forest trusted Matt with everything. That's definitely going to be a help. And wow, way to be blunt, Brian. So now everybody knows there's something up. I wonder how Forest is going to feel about that. =/

    Matt being so paternal in this was amazing. Absolutely loved it, and I hope to see him and Forest grow even closer over time. =)

    Almost didn't know this chapter was here, because the email got sent to my junk folder! Damn email. But I got here eventually! XD Can't wait for more, as always.

    xoxo
    HJ.
    November 25th, 2011 at 11:37am
  • PJ Rocker

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    are you gonna update soon b/c this story is really good!
    November 22nd, 2011 at 12:17am
  • OurDeal

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    He told someone! :D
    November 21st, 2011 at 09:07pm
  • Haylie Jaed

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    I'm really glad that Forest trusted Matt with his secret. That could have ended up very messy if he hadn't.

    xoxo
    HJ.
    November 21st, 2011 at 07:28am
  • OurDeal

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    What's up with Forrest...and aw Haze and Zacky are bonding.....:D
    November 16th, 2011 at 09:20pm
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Hmm, it's nice to see a little more about what's going on in Forest's mind when Shadow starts taking over. Terrifying, too!

    The bonding between Zacky and Hazel was cute. =) And I feel really bad for him. =(

    xoxo
    HJ.
    November 16th, 2011 at 07:49am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Oh, and of course - it's nice to meet somebody else doing NaNoWriMo. =) How's it going for you?
    November 15th, 2011 at 04:03am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    You totally stole my idea!! D= ...I kid, I kid. Seriously though, I was considering writing a Zacky V. father story with boy/girl twins, because...well, those are a few of my favourite things. But I was probably never going to get around to it, so I'm glad I found this. Now I get to read one instead. ;) So thank you for that.

    And wow, what a beginning! I like that you threw in that Forest has to take medication - that's not something that I've seen before, and I love it. I also love that Hazel seems to have taken to everybody so quickly. I don't think I'd still be reading if both of them hated Zacky's guts - too much angst and not enough story. So good job there. XD

    I've subscribed, and I'll be waiting for more. =)

    xoxo
    HJ.
    November 15th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • palazzbm

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    Love this story so far. Can't wait for more updates! :)
    November 15th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • TwistedByTheStars

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    I want to write it but I can't guarentee that it'll be awesome lol. But i'll take over.
    November 9th, 2011 at 03:50am
  • shortygirl

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    I don't have time for a story
    November 9th, 2011 at 03:03am
  • shortygirl

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    I like so far...
    November 2nd, 2011 at 05:45am
  • Sammanthala

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    Write more! Do it Now! Please :C I'll give you a cookie!
    November 2nd, 2011 at 05:04am