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  • After Twilight

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    I love the layout! It's not in the least bit horrible:D I especially liked these lips. Anyway, I LOVED the ending. And who gives if it's cliché and either way, Paris is a -it has to said- SHEXY BEAST. And I loved the last line! Actually, I loved everything. So that means I can stop saying 'I loved . . .' blah blah blah. I actually think the best line in the whole story was:
    "Your hair still looks like Shitler ate to many carrots and puked, I see."
    Gosh, I'm going to miss this story!!!!
    June 4th, 2012 at 01:26am
  • Nanook

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    Oh, and the layout is seriously the best yet. It's not horrible, I love it! That also added to the awesomeness of the ending. :)
    May 21st, 2012 at 01:18am
  • Nanook

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    ^ That's how cute that ending was. :') I was totally going to use a cat gif but I couldn't find the one I was looking for, so I used a seal instead. Isn't it SOO cute, though? :')
    Anyway, I'm glad you didn't leave it on a bad note. Because I thought for sure you were going to, and that was a nice twist. :) Plus, it's good to be different than the initial story you based it off of; you made it more yours by giving it a good ending. :)
    I'm glad that Paris forgave her. Maybe he truly does love her then. I think he does, seeing as he went to see her and all, too. As I started to read that letter back, it sounded like he wasn't going to, but then you surprised us. :)
    I can't believe that it's over! Ahh... I'm going to miss this story. That is definitely fact.
    I'm so glad I read this though. Because you did an amazing job and you're such an amazing writer, and... ahh... this was just, so amazingly written. :)
    Let's officially mark it:

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    :'(
    It's always so sad when things end. But I'm glad you gave it a happy ending to make up for it. :') Aha.
    I believe that is all. Let's go play Twister now!

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    Decided to leave such an epic last comment for the most epic story. :) Amazing job. :D
    May 21st, 2012 at 01:16am
  • xorachsauce

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    I love this. Especially the ending. :)
    May 20th, 2012 at 05:53am
  • ribcages

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    GOD this story was amazing. Xx
    May 19th, 2012 at 02:51am
  • raja sahara

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    Oh my freaking God, this ending was the most perfect thing I have ever read in my life.

    I am taking a break from this mountain of calculus homework that is staring at me to complete BUT holy comolie, I gotta leave a long ass comment because to be quite honest, this story has been one of my favorites lately. You have such an interesting and blunt writing style, and I just love it.

    Paris is my favorite character ever. He's just so blunt (and I see right in front of me on the first page that I wrote that as a comment too. I'm so original with my comments, obvi) and funny and STUBBORN and idk, I love and hate stubborn people. I, myself, am stubborn as well. Maybe that's why. But anywho, I love his struggle to accept his love for Juliet as I HAVE BEEN WANTING SINCE I READ THE FIRST CHAPTER. You almost scared me shitless because for a second, I thought Paris and Juliet would never end up together and even though you didn't exactly close the ending, you left it to our imagination AND YOU KNOW WHAT? THEY ARE TOGETHER IN MY IMAGINATION.

    I'm sad this is over. I feel like I just found this while mindlessly scrolling through the stories page and I suddenly saw, "Sluts in Love" and thought, "Huh. What an interesting title..." and decided to check it out. Definitely one of my better decisions as of late.

    Thank you so much for writing this. I have also gained an awesome new friend because of this story, so yeah, this was a perfectly wonderful story :)
    May 18th, 2012 at 01:37am
  • horserideraja

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    hahaha okay so i was never really sure of this story. i never knew where you were going, i never knew what was exactly happening. but now that i look back at it im like HOLY CRAP THERES THE PLOT LINE. i missed the plot all along. to me the stories made very little chronological sense while i was reading, but in the end it was amazing. not going to lie, the only reason i stayed with the story was because every chapter made me giggle a little, but the end was too freaking cute! i really ended up liking this!
    May 18th, 2012 at 01:32am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the updates! :D
    Great job with them! But, um... oh, you may want to look at your layout, dear. I had to highlight both chapters just to read them, because of the 'This image or video has been moved or deleted... photobucket' icons. XD It's not your fault, though, but you may want to fix that. I hope it's not just my computer that's like that. :O
    lol. This line, right here:
    '"Have we seriously not been over this, you dumb twat?"'
    XD Oh Paris. :P
    Did Juliet really kill herself? :(( I hope not. Why did she rob Paris, though, then? :(
    So sorry for the delay in commenting! I'm caught up now!
    I can't believe there's only one update left! :'( *Tears*...
    May 15th, 2012 at 03:07am
  • After Twilight

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    Oh, how I love this story! What's happened to the layout!? It was so awesome - what's happened to it? And Paris should just say it: 'I love Juliet Elise Carnegee! He's starting to piss me off. He's still sexy though!
    Another update soon, yeah?
    May 15th, 2012 at 01:52am
  • ribcages

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    Not sure if I've ever commented on this before, but I love this story. Good work on it! Can't wait for the last one. Xx
    May 14th, 2012 at 11:22am
  • PoetWithoutHerMuse

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    He finally realized he loves her. Day= Made <3. I'm nervous for the ending because the relationship is doomed from the very beginning
    May 14th, 2012 at 01:30am
  • raja sahara

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    HE. LIKES. HER. HE ADMITTED IT. OMFG. LIFE IS MADE NOW.
    May 14th, 2012 at 01:25am
  • After Twilight

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    Really good update! It's a pity 'bout the layout, 'cause that was a really epic one. But I love Paris, even if he can't admit he loves Juliet. He's just so . . . sexy ;) Another chapter soon? And you wanna know why we stuck to this story? 'Cause its some good shit!
    So another update, or else.
    May 12th, 2012 at 01:21am
  • raja sahara

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    HELLA CONFUSED AS TO WHAT HAPPENED IN THIS CHAPTER BUT I'M LMAO'ING AT THE FACT THAT SHITLER'S NAME IS BRODOLF SHITLER DEAD DYING DEAD.

    2 more...years until this story's over? Cool. I like that very much because I love this story mucho.
    :(
    May 8th, 2012 at 04:37am
  • After Twilight

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    'So, yes, I love food.' Classic! A typical guy-thing, they love food!! Loved it! So freaking awesome. Paris is sexy. And if Juliet ends up killing herself, I hope he feels like shit. Just saying. Someone had to!! Anyway, great update! Another soon, okay?
    May 4th, 2012 at 07:33am
  • magonda.

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    I'm in love with Juliet's character. She's so... Nonchalant and beautifully written. It's really amazing what character you've created for her.
    I'd have to say, she's my favorite.
    May 2nd, 2012 at 06:59am
  • raja sahara

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    All I want is for Paris to admit he loves Juliet. Or for him to realize he's in love with her.

    Das all.
    May 2nd, 2012 at 03:20am
  • Nanook

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    'I take a few steps back because something dawned on me. Is this what the truth feels like? Like I swallowed a fish with razor blade gills that's flipping around in my stomach? Is this love? Do I love her?'
    Awww... ♥
    Does he really love Juliet? Or is this just kind of an 'in-the-moment' feeling he's having? I hope not. That would be so cute if he realizes that he loves her! :')
    But this story isn't really that predictable. So I doubt you're going to make it that easy. :(
    But Juliet can't leave! Like... what?! I really hope she doesn't, like Paris said. That she'll be too lazy to do so. :(
    I love this story. You get so into your characters. Like, I have believed every word you've written for Paris. Because it's just so guy and I wish I could write like that instead of feeling slightly awkward when I write in a guy's point of view. :/
    Aha. But I wish I could just write like you in general! <3
    Great update! Can't wait for more.
    It's winding down... :(
    May 2nd, 2012 at 12:58am
  • golden sparrow

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    AAAAhhhhhhhhh new chapter new chapter!!! And it was awesome as always :D This story makes me really fucking happy...you can tell by the way I'm telling you it makes me really fucking happy haha. Paris is a douche like always but he's such a lovable douche. And just GAH. Love him.
    He needs to stop being in denial about his love for Juliet. It makes me mad :P the way he denies that he's hopelessly and irrevocably in love with Juliet.
    And don't tell me I'm wrong okay? Even if I am just let me be in my state of ingorant bliss.
    Anyways, aaaaammmmmmmaaaazzzzzziiiiiinnnnggggggggggggggggggggggg chapter.
    I'll probably cry myself to sleep if Juliet kills herself. Especially if she hangs herself because that brings up wayyy to many saddd memories....and I've said too much.
    Anyways (again) amazing chapter (again).
    Peace
    May 1st, 2012 at 11:30pm
  • After Twilight

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    OMG I love Pairs!
    And I have to admit, I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!!!! Juliet LOVES Paris!!! It's so awesome. And also, that thing with the cat, that really cracked me up. Because ti was so Juliet and funny. I really hope you update soon.
    I'm so in love with this story!
    April 28th, 2012 at 10:37am