Sluts in Love - Comments

Holy Fuck! He's her brother?!? Wow, I did not see that one coming.
Let me guess, he's not going to tell her is he?
Dammit, now I need more!

Loved the update! :D
Great job with the new chapter. :) lol. Ooh... so is this Dylan Romeo guy going to be the enemy? The guy has balls, you have to give him that, with (I'm thinking) writing his number on Juliet's hand after he clearly saw her kiss Paris.
lol. And it's kind of funny how that other girl is following Juliet around now. :P
Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

I love love love it.
<3

Excellent update! I loved the part about how he "killed" his mother. I don't really have a whole lot more to say, I just wanted to let you know that I'm still reading this and enjoying it to the fullest!

Okay, I love Paris. Done deal.

He fantasized about her. So cute. I cannot wait to see where the coffee shop is going to lead. There is no telling, especially between those two.

Once again, I really appreciate how every aspect of your characters fit in. Juliet's room is perfectly Juliet. Everything is so consistant and that's the best way to be. Kudos to your great writing skills.

I caught just one spelling mistake, if you're interested.
"So with my head in her lap because she plays with my hair and I hate is so much I say, "Fuck that."
That should be "it" I believe.

Still an awesome story.

Loved the update! :)
Hm... so, a lot of back talk in this chapter. Nice.
And I love how at first he fantisized about Juliet. XD Embarrassing, especially considering the way he feels about her now. :o
Great update! Can't wait for more! :D

Poor Shitler, he almost got eaten! Am I supposed to feel worse about Tyler?
Gah! We get a look into what how Juliet began to be this way. Sadly that only creates more questions rather than answer the ones I already have.
One of my favourite things about this story is that all though it's completely down to earth, it never gives there reader a second to breath. The characters keep you spinning and nothing is predictable. Even this far in I don't feel all that sure about what to expect with the next chapter or which direction this will go in. I love that, it's so captivating.
Dying for the next update :D

MONTAGUE. THAT'S WHAT MONTY IS SHORT FOR. Oh my God, I feel so stupid. Like, you have no idea. I should've related it!! Like, with the names being all Romeo and Juliet related and such. :P
I should've never bothered guessing, because I wasn't even close. So just pretend I didn't, okay? :D
Anyway, Adele, aha. Gotta love her. :P
But why isn't Juliet there for Paris? :( I thought she'd at least do that, since she embarassed him. She needs to make it up to him. Poor guy. :(
And another guy who suffered for crossing Juliet's path. Tsk tsk... they need to be more careful before crossing her. But I love how it was Paris that got him to transfer then, for the announcement he made. Nice.
Great job with the update, darling! Can't wait for moreee! :D

Loved the update! :)
Hm... so he gets mad at Juliet and Rosaline in this chapter. :/ But what Juliet did wasn't very nice, so... you can't really blame him. I don't understand why he got mad at Rosaline though... he did get mad at her, right? XD
Will he have to explain things to her? And is Juliet really planning what she said? :o
Great update! Can't wait for the next! :D

Now this was brilliant. Finally a story about Paris. I really like the way Paris describes the world he's in and the people around him, it makes it so easy to know what kind of a person he is, and his crude and plain way of describing things made me laugh at several occasions. I am definitely subscribing to this.

Paris is so blunt. I love it.

I am so interested in this story, it's so crazy and unusual but amazingly well written. At first I wasn't sure if I'd hook on, but considering I just ate up seven whole chapters, I'd say I'm a fan. Paris is such an odd character, but loveable despite his homicidal thoughts. There is something really compelling about his relationship with Juliet and I can't help but wonder exactly how Rosaline will fit into the picture. Everything about his personality is flawlessly consistant too, which is awesome. I always hate when someone has a (for lack of a better word) screwed up character but then gives them some fluff tendency. The guy named his dog Shitler for god's sake! I love it. More please!

Oh, and I'm totally subbed.
& happy holidays.

Loved the update! :D
Hm... I have no idea what it's short for. I actually know a kid my age named Monty, ironically enough. XD But it's not short for anything... so, I don't know what to guess. If the kid I know's name was a nickname, I would know, but... it isn't. XD
So... yeah.
But wait... Monty... Mont...Mont-gomery? Montgomery? OH MY GOD, IS THAT IT? IS IT?
That kind of suits a bald guy, alright. I picture that name on a bald guy, I seriously do.
I don't know how I came up with that. I don't think the kid I know's name is that... I'll have to look it up. But I'm pretty sure his name is just Monty... hm...
Anyway, lol, great update! And I'll nearly have a heart attack if I actually guessed the name right. XD
Can't wait for more!
Paris is just a sarcastic, twisted guy, isn't he? :/

I. Love. You.
I think that's all that needs to bee said.

Loved the update! :)
Aww... poor Paris indeed. What crappy luck is that? His mother having died on his birthday. What happened to her? :(
No one he doesn't enjoy celebrating it. :/ You can't blame him.
Great update! Can't wait for more!
Thanks for the mention darling. :) I'm glad I can be one of the people to make you happy. :DD

Loved the update! :)
Hm... that was kind of awkward. With Rosaline and Juliet and everything. lol. And ugh, she cuts herself with tacks, basically? I'm cringing just thinking about it.
lol. At first I didn't like it, but when I wrote in a boy's pov for the first time, it kind of felt natural too. XD So I know what you mean. :P
Great update! Can't wait for more!
And thanks for the mention darling. :D It's no problem, really. :)

"I find solace in numbers because they're always the same."
I couldn't relate more.
SHITLER. OMG. I LOVE YOU.
"I was jacking off on top of your brother's grave. It wiped me out."
I can relate to this too. :D
loljk.
what even is this story.
what even.
I don't know.
but I like it.
i want to get inside
your brain.

This is such a good story omg. I like how you write Paris. He's so carefree.
Update soon!

Yay, another update! :D
Hm... so this Roger character is... interesting. What exactly is Parris's past with him? And what exactly were they talking about, I wonder?
And then Juliet showed up. Gotta love her, right? :P
Great update! Can't wait for more! :D