April 27th, 2012 at 02:28am
Oh my god.
I don't think I'll be able to say or think anything else for a few days. Here I was, dying of boredom and trying to find a good story in the hopeless sea of horrible ones and then yours popped up. At first I was like....meh...it's probably one of those horribly cliche stories that aggrevate the fuck out of me, but I tried it anyways because...well you had a lot of chapters up. And holy crap.
OH MY GOD.
Amazingness, I couldn't decide between slitting my wrists because of how depressing your story is or singing hallellueha (I can't spell that word) to the heavens.
Paris is just...really freaking awesome. He's crazy and pisses me off but he's just so...dude like....and I don't know. There's just something about him, the way he acts like a real person. I feel like I can relate to his feelings and the way he thinks. I mean, I may not be as crazy as him but he does have some good points. And the way he's so hopelessly in love with Juliet but just can't seem to admit it (at least that's what i take from his thoughts) is really cute. I love him.
Juliet is awesome too, she has this crazy girl secretly sane and dying inside vibe...or...that's what i think at least, for all I know she's truely crazy, but we're not inside her head, we're in Paris' so we don't have the privelege of knowing that. The way you write is soo amazing and I feel like your characters are so real and their problems are problems that maybe not everyday people go through but you make it seem like they do.
I feel really stupid about this but I really didn't get the whole Juliet Paris thing...I was like okay cool, not Romeo, and then when you introduced Dylan Romeo I was like............................................................................................OH SHIT! Paris IS from Romeo and Juliet!! And then I got really depressed because I want Paris and Juliet to be together so bad that if you make her fall in love with Romeo I will have to go into my little emo corner and slit my wrists.
Anyways, now that I've left you a really really really long comment I'm going to stalk some of your other stories.
Peace.
She loves him! Juliet loves Paris!!
Aww... :') That's so cute. And aha, I love how she brought up the moment when she first fell in love with him. :)
Great job with the update! Hm... we also found out about what Juliet has done to those people. And a little dirt on Romeo himself. Interesting.
Can't wait for more! :D
How will Paris respond? :o