June 21st, 2013 at 12:46pm
I did a happy dance when I saw this had been updated!
What a chapter.. WHAT A CHAPTER!
This was so worth the wait!! So intense! My heart was in my mouth while my ass was hanging off my seat reading this! Gahhh!
I winced and cringed more than once reading this, all her injuries! Poor Jess I pictured everything as if I were right there in the room with her, it was chilling. I'm so sad he has her, all throughout I was hoping and praying she would break free!
The way you write Shadows is just insane! That's probably what he is, poor guy is seriously fucked up in the head. I was fist pumping the air reading that she fought back, on more than one occasion. You can do it Jess, I have faith! He's delusional if he thinks he can keep her locked up for much longer!
Where is Nathan?! *panic face* don't you dare hurt him Shadows, or I'll jump into this story and ninja kick you in the face! I love the dialogue, the cool, calm Shadows as he taunts her, then the angry nutter when she doesn't obey him. Come on Bri, get your ass out of jail and go save yo woman and child!
I'm sorry, I had to laugh at the exchange between the Rev and Shadows. It's like all his tough guy exterior melts away whenever the Rev is present. He is indeed like a little toddler! XD
Normally I find it hard to imagine him as a bad person, he's always so boisterous and charming. But in this story, he's just plain evil! So cold and calculating. Kudos to you! A taser? Really James?
I'm not quite sure I can function properly enough to go back to work now, my mind is whirring with possibilities, questions, what ifs! If anyone needs me, I'll be over there in the corner, biting my nails waiting for more! XD
Amazing chapter is amazing!
And to answer your comment, I would need an extremely large flower
Thank you, this made me grin so much I'm glad you enjoyed it so much :D
And yes, an incredibly massive flower....or a tree.