I'm liking the idea of it, and you never disappoint. Just gotta stay on your toes so I won't guess anymore of it. 
And not guess it all 
haha. 
I'm hoping he's not being treated too badly. I mean, I don't really picture Shadows and Rev being great with kids, but I don't want the poor baby being too traumatized. Poor thing. I really am hoping he's alright. And Jess is one badass motherfucker. Even though I already knew she wasn't going to get free, a part of me still thought she could actually do it. I am curious to see how long it'll take her to change her M.O. She's pretty smart though, and combine that with her motherly instinct, it probably won't take long at all. I'm just curious if her need to get Nathan out of there will make her fight longer or change plans faster than she would if it was just her being held captive. I can't ever be too sure what you're going to do, so I'm definitely excited to see. Absolutely loved the update! :D 
dammit you're so good at describing everything in a way that it makes you feel like you're there watching.. shadows is a sick sick man- but somehow still so fuckin' hot 
I apologize in advance, it's 4:30AM and I'm just a little tired, but I finally fucking re-read this whole story. I've been so busy, it wasn't an easy task to get done in a few days. Honestly, this story is way too good to be read this quickly, but I had to catch up again. After all, the new chapter was fucking insane, amazingly insane.
You know it, I have told you so many times, but I will tell you again: I love this story. I loved Scream, I love your writing. Honestly, you're the greatest fucking writer anyone could ever wish to find on a site like this, if not even this whole world. But that's just my humble opinion. Actually scratch that, my opinion is valid and extremely important. I'm the Truth Fairy after all.
Farrrrk, I'm supposed to comment on the story, i know, I know, I'm getting there. You know why I love this story so much? Put aside the fact that your simple writing, your choice of wording and everything is just so perfect, the whole idea is so fucking amazing! I don't wanna ask how much it took for you to even be able to think of everything. The way you connect all the characters, the little relationships, the way you don't forget to put light on every single little aspect that would make the story more interesting. just think of how much this story would be losing if you only mainly explained the main characters issues. You make this story feel so real, you put so much life in it, I'm so amazed and honestly so jealous because I wish I could do something like that. You go girl. ♥
I remember when I first read this, I was all for Matt. i was such a Matt girl. I'm sure it had something to do with Scream, but I admit I have to re-read that too because it's been forever and I only remember bits and pieces. While re-reading this, you made me fall in love with Brian and Jess together - but... haha, but... I love Matt, that crazy fucker. I was so excited to find him back in the last chapters. I don't know what it is, but this love for him won't die, no matter how insane he gets. (And by the way, that last chapter was spine chilling) (do you say that like that?)
I love the way you describe him and I'm dying to know how this story will continue. I bet you got some surprises up your sleeves that will either make us all love or hate you. I'm prepared! Just please don't take Matt away from me again because I have missed him and I want him to stay. GOSH I AM SO EXCITED.
This story is amazing. Sorry for not getting straight to my point and leaving so much of what I wanted to say out, but...oh my god.